Twilight Sparkle asks "What is love?" Cadance answers...and her answer isn't what Twilight expects.
Also, bonus scene to get out of the deep psychological mood.
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DeathFox4
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Not one Haddaway reference. I am disappointed.
Love is the condition in which the happiness of another is essential to your own.
-Heinlein
Read this, hoping there would be a "what is love? Baby dont hurt me" refrence.
Am dissapoint.
But it was a nice story none the less.
That, right there. Luna, what would we ever do without you?
For this, you get a fave and a like.
7014015 Sorry to disappoint you. I hoped you enjoyed regardless.
7014066 Thanks for the quote!
7014268 Sorry for not referencing that...lol. I can't reference everything. Glad you enjoyed regardless!
7014297 What would we do? Sit around and be bored judging the day court like Princess Celestia. Next...next...next...
Thanks for the favorite and like!
I don't get it. I write one random thing, post it, and it blows up in 4 hours. I just posted this cause I could, and this already has more likes and views than most of my stories!
Thanks everypony and hope you enjoy my future works....
(Why do I feel like there needs to be a sequel now...?)
7014644 Oh my Sunbutt, make a sequel happen!
7014750 Gah! You guys are killing me here (with happiness.) This is my most popular story to date.
I'll think of something...but I had originally planned for this to be a one-shot...let me think. Hope this satisfies you until the sequel is posted!
7015113
YAY!
I mean, yay!
BABY DONT HURT ME
NO MORE
7016633 It's technically 9:59:59.
Lol.
Thanks for the comment, and hope you enjoyed...
Everypony thank you. Less than 24 hours of posting this, this is my most popular story to date. I don't even...why?
Who cares! Thanks everypony!
7014750 Sequel is UP!
It can be found here.
...
Please don't hate on it.
Also, posted a chapter update for the sequel...umm...please like?
Just a warning, it's actually against site rules to make a chapter like this for the only purpose of telling people there is a sequel. You can only do a blog update. :/
7037872 I...really? Oops...uh...
My fault. Next time I do the sequel update, I'll put in a little filling. Thanks for letting me know.
Hmm.
The way the story structure presented is slightly confusing, but not by too much. Also was having a bit of a tough time figuring out who was talking; just a minor lack of identification really, nothing too too serious.
As for the story itself, I find nothing wrong with it other then minor structure issues. The confusing love between all the main characters I found a little distasteful. (Personal preference...just ignore it.)
Now for the topic of the story and how well it was executed...well, I can say it was good. Your idea of love and how you wrote it out is beautiful; to say the least. Which is probably why it got a minor take off.
Ultimately, the story is good, far from bad. (Ignoring the minor story structure and character identification issues) I've read far worse and this does not fall into that category.
As for what you can expect from PaulAsaran...not sure. He might mention the named issues. (ignoring personal preference) But beyond that is anybody's guess. I simply don't know him well enough, other then the fact he's thorough.
I know you're already aware, but...
You can has review!