• Published 16th Apr 2016
  • 824 Views, 12 Comments

A Rosing Cream - Ink Script



Taking place after the events of "Slice of Life," Roseluck is a regular of Bon Bon's, setting up in the bay window to type another romance over friendly coffee, but romance never makes it to the page that morning.

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Comments ( 8 )

7130152
Thank you very kindly, Livin' ~ :pinkiehappy:

I was already wondering why there are so few upvotes and comments, but this story is a fairly new one. So that'll probably come, given time.

With my initial confusion explained - this little tale was so incredibly sweet, I don't think I could stand another sugarcube this day... or week. You did a fantastic job breathing life to Bon Bon and Roseluck. Their romance felt like it actually had developed over time, not the 'usual suddenly-madly-in-love'-angle. Their hesitation, their nervousness, it was... beautiful.

Thank you.

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That is a very kind and motivating gift of feedback, Mermerus; thank you for taking the time to lend your thoughts on this project and for their kindness ~ :twilightsmile:

We demand... MOOOOAAAAR! <3 Really great fic you guys~

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Roseluck: Listen, it's a habit! ... I'm not saying it's a good one, but ... c'mon, good visual, right?

7156269 Ink has got some POWERFUL talent with those weird expressions, y'all don't even know the half of it. I seem to remember one about a boat...

That was one of the best romance fics I have ever read. The precise descriptions of the actions and the characterisation of the cute ponies are really well done.

This deserves way more upvotes and views!

So much fluff and sweetness, this was almost too much to handle.

I must say that I truly enjoyed this story and wish more people gave some feedback or bothered to give this a like, you really do deserve it. I'm impressed by how well written this is and by the creative descriptions, as well as the plot.

Considering I'm used to horribly rushed stories, this was a nice change of pace and worth reading overall.

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