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Spike never was one for shaking up the status quo. That's why he'd left the whole 'Lord Dver all Dragons' thing to his new friend, Ember. They'd taken care of Garble, they'd saved Equestria, and he even got to play king for a bit. That was enough for a happy ending.
That's when Garble decided to take a little detour, with his old pack to back him up, to finally get some good old fashioned revenge.
His pack, however, has other plans in mind for their new friend.

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:twilightoops: I leave for just a day? and this happens !
:pinkiegasp::applejackconfused::rainbowderp: quess who's cleaning this mess up
:duck: My Spikey Wikey
:moustache: yep. yours truly. . .Prunes? :facehoof:

7148881 I think YOU should clean the mess up.

7150505 Prunes? Nope nope nope nope nopenope nope nope nope nopenope nope nope nope

Castle door heard opening and slamming shut. . . .
:moustache: Stupid Hillbe is no help at all.

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Oh my goodness. :ajsmug:

Oh no, Garble gonna do mayhem.

Not half-bad. Good work, though for some reason, your writing is confusing at times. There were points where I didn't quite get what was happening during the party and Fizzle was really confusing.

Still, not bad.

I would offer myself up as a proofreader but I have no idea how to become a proofreader!
(also I'm really quite new here)

I wonder what they going to do

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