Luke Skywalker crash lands on Equestria. Twilight Sparkle, Spike, and their friends help him repair his droid and his ship, but in the process he develops friendships with them. Will he return to the fight against the last remnants of the Empire, or will his new friendships, and his feelings towards the Princess of Friendship be enough to make him stay?
The first couple of thousand words of this story were a collaboration with Short Stories, but the rest is me. Proofread by Arian Blaze plus the people of the Crossover Skype Chat.
See if you can also spot references to Doctor Who, Star Trek, The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, and Back to the Future.
Chapters (1)
Twas amazing! Also, May the fourth be with you!
Wut
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You heard me.
What what what.
Word, yo.
What is bae? Do you mean bay?
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http://www.dictionary.com/browse/bae
noun. Slang. an affectionate term used to address or refer to one’s girlfriend, boyfriend, etc.
7187147
you mean baBe ok I get it
Wtf
7187141
No, as in "baby" (in the context of a romantic relationship), or someone you think is cute and maybe want to be in a relationship with.
7187182 I don't get it, again
Why spell it bae if Baby doesn't have an "E" in it
Ruined by having the word Bae in the title.
a god among men
And this takes place during what movie?
Star Wars/The Empire Strikes Back/Star Wars: Episode VI - Return of the Jedi
I was wondering what Fimfiction was gonna produce for this year's May 4th.
This was not one of my guesses.
Lel. Nothing weird about this.
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Between episodes 6 and 7.
*looks at upvote/downvote meter*
I see the Light Side and the Dark Side are almost precisely in balance.
lol best story ive ever read
kill meh
Ayyyyy das pretty good.
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Also means excrement in Danish.
I like the story, but the title is misleading.
According to Urban Dictionary Luke Skywalker thinks Twilight Sparkle is poop cause bae in Danish means poop. Might wanna redo the title
Is it just me, or was Luke completely imitating Qui-Gon's talking patterns in this?
indeed
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Or maybe Urban Dictionary, being ostensibly a dictionary of the English language (albeit one that specializes in slang), should better reflect the most common definition most English speakers mean when they use the word? Just an idea.
7191845 its a stupid word
7192043
You're a stupid word.
7192131 way to be a 5 year old buddy
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You're a five year old buddy.
Honestly, I'm not into this story. The reason are that the Characters are One-Dimensional with little to no personality and some of them are either stupid like Twilight or cruel like Spike. Plus, only 3 out of the Main 6 are Present in the Story.
1: Twilight is supposed to be Really Intelligent, so shouldn't she figure out that Luke is not talking about the Crystal Empire and not assume that he's from the Human World because if he's a Human, then shouldn't she realize that he might be an alien that looks similar to her Human Counterparts.
2: Spike is Twilight's number 1 assistant and is almost like a little brother or son to her, so why exactly is he acting like a Jerk in this story? There's really no reason for him to be doing so.
3: Don't even get me started on both Pinkie and Rainbow, because I've already read stories that portrayed them horribly before, and it's just getting real annoying.
4: Finally, Luke is a very wise and powerful Jedi, though his personality here has been stripped, his sudden love for Twilight feels really forced and it only makes the story even more boring for me than it already is.
I'm sorry to say this, but I think this story Needs Improvement. But try to flesh out the characters next time and don't fall into so many clichés of storytelling. Try to create something a little more Unique for your Audience so that they can feel entertained and be compelled to read more of your stories. So, better luck next time and don't get yourself down.
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No damn clue.
I know nothing about Star Wars, but this story seemed to be well written. I had a few moments or cringe, especially around the part where Luke and Twilight kissed. I've written unfounded love stories before, man. There's nada single reason for them to be intimate.Other than that, good job.
High five before Scotty beams me up?
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It was a random experimental idea that mostly doesn't work, but I did the best I could with it.
Also, Scotty is from Star Trek.
7345763 I'm sorry, it was joke.
I'm going to leave now...
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I suspected it might be, but wasn't 100%.
These memes were too stronk for the masses, my friend.
My childhood memories just died.
Sequel?
You just had to cross My Little Pony with Star Wars, didn't you? Comment posted June 15, 2022.