Rocks, no matter what you may here about dogs and so forth, are the most loyal companions you could ask for. Maud knows this first hand, and she has decided to share her experiences with rock responsibility to the rest to Equestria.
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A rather interesting start. It had a few grammar issues, but nothing too serious. Toward the end of th chapter, there were no paragraph breaks, but in their place, this: >
Not sure what happened there, it may just be my phone, I don't know.
Good job!
7290760 Thank you very much!! Could you possibly point out those grammar issues for me to fix them? I will fix those > I was on mobile finishing it and there was no tab button. Thanks again!!
Right now my biggest question is:
How can a rock that's been on a rock farm that's presumably closer to Ponyville than to Manehatten have the latter's accent?
And that's a sign of how good this is already, if that's the only thing I can question
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Haha thank you very much!! And also thanks for adding this to your favorites, it means a whole lot to me.