This story is a sequel to What Lies Within
The sixth installment following The Midnight Dance, Sweet Pea, Daughter of the Moon, The Phoenix Tear, and What Lies Within. Based on the fairy-tale: The Snow Queen. History repeats itself when Twilight and her sisters bring in suitors for their children, but their reactions are less than thrilled. Because of this icy attitude, they put their family in great peril! Co-author: KidatHeart5
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Haha!
Meta.
So the boys are all in, but the girls are plotting...
Aww, they grow up so fast.
Also,
Since when did Sunset get married and to who?
7304679 CN12 wanted to keep the identity of Sunset's husband anonymous since there could still be a chance Sunset could find someone in the Equestria Girls franchise. However, we already created her offspring.
We will reveal what exactly Sunset has been up to in a future story.
7304790 Exactly, so regarding the line in question I wanted to point out that Sunset at least had a kid in the fourteen years that had passed.
7304798 Are we going to see a reappearance of Prince Asher? Also, OH COME ON, girls! Even when your moms were going behind your grandmother's back, they were being more dutiful and understanding than you're being right now. Furthermore, I'm surprised that the moms didn't catch on that their little boys were in love, or did they and were just being enigmatic about it?
By the way, OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH! I! TOTALLY! CALLED IT!
Will she get wings when she has true love's kiss?
Is this story based on The Snow Queen written by Hans Christian, or is another one?
Could you please put the link of the original story?
7304489 Why do I get the feeling that they're going to make the boys help them scare away suitors?
7305699 I get that feeling too.
And now, you know 100% that at least some of the Canterlot girls will fall in love, if not all.
Um, hello?! I also wrote the part from "'Well, I already got rid of the Umbrum...'" to "'...past us first!'".
7311186 I know, right? Every child says that they will never fall in love, but then they grow up.
Also, why is everyone being so hard on Twilight and her sisters?
Getting too intimate too soon can be bad. Look at what almost happened to Anna in Frozen. 
If having some degree of familial involvement prevents stuff like that, then why not? Besides, most parents, including mine, tend to have better judgments than their kids most of the time.
My last comment just gave me a chilling realization. Is there going to be a Prince Hans pony OC in this story?!
Oh, I think I'm going to need to borrow Rarity's fainting couch. And a barf bag.
7311308 Oh f*** no!
7311555 To ponified Hans or to my sudden desire to faint and vomit?
Quite honestly, neither of those things sounds pleasant.
7311591 A Hans-based OC.
*shudders* No. Just no.
Thank you for crediting me, sis!
7316566 It's the least I can do.
"LE GASP" Coco and Silver had a kid, and he's in love with Gem!
You can't always get what you want, but sometimes you get what you need.
Also, things never happen the same way twice. I personally think the girls just need to deal with this and keep an open mind.
Well, in Jewel's case, she needs to tell someone about her little secret. I'm sure Spike and AJ will be understanding. 
Furthermore, please tell me that the Maretonian Prince isn't Hans.
7322813 YAS! That ship! I love that ship!
7322875 I can give you that. Don't worry, there is no Hans OC in this story.
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OH HELL NO!
I swear, if that [censored][censored][censored][censored]...
Mmm... I don't even...
If it is, Screwy's the Anna in the tale. I can tell.
7323050 Sighs, I guess I have to say this, but there will not be any Hans OCs in this story. So don't worry I never intended of adding one anyway.
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It might just be because of the way I was raised, but why are the Mane 6's daughters so hard to sympathize with in this story?
I sympathized with the Mane 6 and Button Mash in their stories, but here, the girls remind me of my little sister when our parents won't let her buy a new toy.
7323117 If the daughters didn't act this way, we wouldn't have a story (kind of), and a moral to boot.
7323117 Trust us when we say it's important that they act this way.
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So, am I supposed to sympathize with them or not? It's just that Button Mash seems to sympathize with them, which makes it look like the audience is supposed to sympathize with them, but they're not acting very sympathetic at all.
Girls, it's getting harder and harder for me to like you...
Jewel, Gem, Screwy? You're fine, but Star and Cotton? Girls, get your act together. At least be discreet about it, not up in their faces.
And the sad part's that they really weren't there for that reason.
Everything's just going downhill for the girls...
But the boys are having the time of the lives with their dates.
7325724 No amount of facehoof emoticons will be enough to adequately express how disappointed I am with the girls.
7325823 Exactly
At first, I was taken aback by what Gem and Dignity said to their parents, but then, I remembered those times when I wished my parents would trust my judgement more. The struggle of having adult children is finding the balance between protecting them and letting them fend for themselves, and as the Mane 6 have discovered, the struggle is real.
Finally, someone's talking sense.
So, the girls are slowly finding love, and the boys and their marefriends are freaking out over their futures? Why do I get the feeling that something is about to explode?
Why do I get the feeling that Rock Salt is Maud's kid?
7331949 He's not.
YESSS! A SEQUEL TO THE FAIRY-TALE SERIES BY CARTOON NERD! BEST DAY EVER!
UUUGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!
Not this crap again.
*claps* Encore! Thank heavens!
Something's gonna happen... I can feel it.
What?! WHAT?!
Okay, you're upset with your parents for not letting you guys have as much freedom as you want, but then you force your cousin to make a decision that she didn't want to make? How does that even make any sense?! 
Oh, right. Princess of chaos.
Nuuuuuhhhhh...
Why Screwy? Everypony was back on my like list, then you did this bullcrap!
Frozen references everywhere!!!!
Really, guys?
Really?! 
You're pushing the blame of your awkward situation with your marefriends onto your parents and the girls? 
Hey, if it wasn't for your parents, you'd still be pining after your beloveds from afar because you guys were too scared to leave your comfort zones.
(sarcastically) No! You don't say! What ever gave you that idea?
I don't know what bugs me more, the boys, who up until this chapter were pretty likable, blaming others for their own lack of initiative, or the fact that it took Snow Pea getting kidnapped by Windigos for them to realize what brats they've been throughout most of this story.
Oh no, Snow Pea!!!
I like how there seems to be two different stories and they're coming together - Snow Pea's story and the royal children's own story to find their 'significant other' I have to admit I would have loved Screwball being so driven with guilt that she admitted what she'd done to Gemstone of her own accord, but I like how Gemstone realising what happened and confronting her on it helps the story to proceed as well.
Can't wait for the next chapter and to see where this story goes.
It's all your fault, [insert name here]! ...I don't know who to yell at!