Two to the one and a one to the three, I like good Hentai and I like Shipping
Umbra Night, a forgotten Prince of a forgotten race, was only a colt when he was found by Luna. She took him in becoming his teacher, friend, and his family. Even into adulthood they remained close, but when Luna is lost to the arms of her own darkness, will Umbra risk everything to free her from banishment, or will he fall into darkness as well...
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The colt's name is Umbra Night, or Shadow Night. You are so close to calling him Night Night it's not ever funny.
Also your description is a little rigid, at least I think that's the right word. I had some time so I wrote this to help it flow better, use it if you want.
7491844 Wow, that's pretty good.
7492303 MUST. HAZ. MOARRRT.
“Umbra, do you feel it’s pain? Do you feel it’s weakness and vulnerability?” Umbra said with a soft and sincere tone. do you mean luna said in soft and sincere to unholy/shippin
7514989 umbra is talking to himself
Not really
I like it
Is it just me or all the words suddenly bolded
7528033 You're right. If I make a word bold then every word after it becomes bold, but I fixed it, the text should be normal now.
7528199 Yeah. Make sure the [ /b] is where you want to stap the bolding
7528247 I did, but somehow it continued.
Sorry the next chapter is taking so long. This chapter's a doozie.
This is AMAZING!
So far so good.