Discord and I are best friends, and we wouldn't miss our weekly visits for anything, which is why I had to decline Twilight's offer to come on a picnic with the other Elements and Starlight. I never expected everypony would tell me that there was nopony named Discord that we knew, and there definitely wasn't such thing as a draconequus.
Two scentences in and there's already a spelling error. Crap
Edit: errors fixed
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>>Scorch215
That was actually really funny you people make my day!
7316374 glad I could brighten your day.
That ending was so sweet!
OH. MY. GOSH. There is another dumb error that I missed! Argh, why do I not see these things before posting? I am blind (actually, that's probably why I have glasses )
How dare you make me feel emotions like that! I almost cried at the thought of Fluttershy being alone without Discord! It was adorable and heart-breaking and amazing, thank you.
>>BubbleBerryBlitz
That sounds totally like something I would say about a Fluttercord shipfic, so you now have my stamp of approval.
Me likey
Awwwwwww poor Flutters
Loved this!
It would've been great if you used new lines everytime a character speaks.
On the other hand, holy sh*t you scared the f*ck out of Fluttershy.
Nicely done, bruh.
Finally got around d to reading this and while I was at first going to say the pace of her friends thinking something was wrong so suddenly was way to fast the fact it was a dream negates that fact because dream logic.
Only real issue is that you didn't start a new paragraph whenever a new person started speaking so it was very hard to know who was saying what and kept taking me out of the story as I had to stop to figure it out.
Other then that it was a nice entertaining little story with an interesting idea.
7364659 Your rainbow dash looks ready for anything.. except a marine sniper, lol
Ok. Let's do this.
Good news first.
I'm a sucker for fluttercord. Nicely done! Cheeky discord, I love it.
Bad news.
I was a little disappointed that it was all but a dream. I had wished to see a crazy Fluttershy who needs help.
Overall, nicely done!