Twilight Sparkle decided to use the Time Travelling spell to study how pony society used to be like centuries before Equestria's founding. While there, she found a familiar white coated Earth Pony filly with a curious name. Lost and her home burned down, the filly found herself under Twilight's care with a promise of either finding her a new home or searching for her parents. Twilight will learn more than just her history lesson while on their adventures.
And so the student becomes the mentor, and the mentor becomes the student.
Excellent start
Yes! I've been looking for another story like this for awhile. I hope for more soon!
I like the idea of the story. I'll track it.
Though I have to wonder where Luna is and how those two become sisters. Also how long is Twilight gonna stay in the past? Just a relatively short time to get Celestia on her path of pacifism or is Twi gonna be the one who oversees Celestias and possibly Lunas ascension?
For now I like the execution so keep it up.
MfG NIchtraucher
7499819 I still haven't got into that part yet, you have to wait.
Though you can freely speculate if you want, my creative mind does that all the time.
7499810 There is a similar incomplete story that has Twilight mentoring both unicorn Celestia and Luna who escaped their father because of his cruelty. I think it was called 'My Faithful Students'.
7499746 Thank you.
7499943 yea I already read that one but i'm not sure if it'll get updated and what was there just made me want more
7500251 Don't we all.
Man, I love stories like this!
7500595 So do I! Unfortunately, they're very rare so I decided to try writing one.
Great start can't wait for the next chapter
7502910 Thank you.
Twily in the past... i love stories about this, but they all have 1 big issue. Authors can't end them. I really hope to read this story to it's end. Pls don't stop halfway!
7503358 I hope don't stop halfway, either. I just need to think how to end it and then put it in my plan list so I won't forget.
Interesting start! I like it so far. I will be keeping an eye on this.
good start
And we're off to an amazing start! I look forward to reading more of this soon! Hopefully you'll continue it.
8182732 I haven't been able to find motivation to continue writing to be honest. Hopefully, I will continue. Thank you for your compliment.
Please continue writing this... There are not enough of these stories
Huh, a nice start, I think the part with Daffodil and Sunny at the beginning was sad, and the bit about the druid sacrifice was creepy. All in all, a good first chapter! Hope to see more of this sometime!
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Hey, you finally started reading my stories! I hope I will get my motivation back to break that block and continue writing it.
What?!?!
That was actually pretty good!