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La Vallett1


A pony fanfiction reader from Malta. Sometimes write when inspired. Once a Scout, always a Scout. Most important of all, Twilight is best pony.

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Twilight Sparkle decided to use the Time Travelling spell to study how pony society used to be like centuries before Equestria's founding. While there, she found a familiar white coated Earth Pony filly with a curious name. Lost and her home burned down, the filly found herself under Twilight's care with a promise of either finding her a new home or searching for her parents. Twilight will learn more than just her history lesson while on their adventures.

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And so the student becomes the mentor, and the mentor becomes the student.

Excellent start

Yes! I've been looking for another story like this for awhile. I hope for more soon! :rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy:

I like the idea of the story. I'll track it.
Though I have to wonder where Luna is and how those two become sisters. Also how long is Twilight gonna stay in the past? Just a relatively short time to get Celestia on her path of pacifism or is Twi gonna be the one who oversees Celestias and possibly Lunas ascension?
For now I like the execution so keep it up.:twilightsmile:
MfG NIchtraucher

7499819 I still haven't got into that part yet, you have to wait.:trollestia:

Though you can freely speculate if you want, my creative mind does that all the time.:raritywink:

7499810 There is a similar incomplete story that has Twilight mentoring both unicorn Celestia and Luna who escaped their father because of his cruelty. I think it was called 'My Faithful Students'.

7499943 yea I already read that one but i'm not sure if it'll get updated and what was there just made me want more :derpytongue2:

Man, I love stories like this!

7500595 So do I! Unfortunately, they're very rare so I decided to try writing one.

Great start can't wait for the next chapter

Twily in the past... i love stories about this, but they all have 1 big issue. Authors can't end them. I really hope to read this story to it's end. Pls don't stop halfway!

7503358 I hope don't stop halfway, either. I just need to think how to end it and then put it in my plan list so I won't forget.

Interesting start! I like it so far. I will be keeping an eye on this.

And we're off to an amazing start! I look forward to reading more of this soon! Hopefully you'll continue it.

8182732 I haven't been able to find motivation to continue writing to be honest. Hopefully, I will continue. Thank you for your compliment.

Please continue writing this... There are not enough of these stories

Huh, a nice start, I think the part with Daffodil and Sunny at the beginning was sad, and the bit about the druid sacrifice was creepy. All in all, a good first chapter! Hope to see more of this sometime! :twilightsmile:

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Hey, you finally started reading my stories!:yay: I hope I will get my motivation back to break that block and continue writing it.

What?!?!
That was actually pretty good!

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