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After some time of planning, Spike, Twilight Sparkle, and Starlight Glimmer decide to take some time to hang out at the Chrystal Empire for a few weeks. While Starlight and Twilight have their moments of peace, Spike decides to dedicate his time to his best friend Thorax. Little do these two know that their friendship is going to be blossoming into something a bit more than friendship.
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haha ending so funny i love it
love it
https://e621.net/post/show/975528/2016-ambiguous_gender-blue_eyes-blush-boop-changel I think this would've been a better image just putting it out there
good wake
Hey guys I just started a new group on Fimfiction. It is a group called SpikexThorax, simple as that. If you want to go there and submit a story then click on the link. I would really love the support.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211339/thorax-x-spike
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It's an interesting picture sure, but I'm going to stick with what I have for my title card, heck I plan on updating it soon. Thanks for the suggestion though.
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All fixed.
I was suprised when i saw my fanart as the cover, but it's still pretty nice seeing it being put to good use.
As for the fanfiction itself, it was pretty decent.
Excluding some grammar-errors here & there, i liked it very much.
Good work ol' chap.
Looking past the admittedly extensive amount of spelling errors and a little bit of grammatical errors. I like this story so far.
Thanks for the feedback. Sorry about the spelling errors, I was kinda rushed when I did this story. Plus Google Docs really sucks at spelling.? Other than that, thank you so much.7538632
7535796 Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm thinking about making another fan fiction between these two. That sound good.
i thought thorax was a boy
This needs edited... badly. The sentences where there wasn't a spelling, grammar, or formatting error were the minority, which makes it incredibly hard to read.
Will keep an eye on it because I so very much want a good SpiRax story and your enthusiasm is at least there.
7549650 He is
A nice fiction, i liked the story.
A few spelling errors where there, but in my opinion the story itself is what counts.
Hope you will maybe one day may a sequel or something like that, i really love that ship.
So cute
Thorax is adoracute.
I agree with Haledrake, there's something truely great in the making here but there's too many gramatical and spelling errors to make this a very enjoyable read.
This isn't a actual criticism just my personal opinion. I don't like the term agender, I think it would make more sense and have the story flow a little better if Thorax just said he didn't have a gender. For actual criticism though the extensive detail of the changeling anatomy wasn't exactly required and kinda ruined the cute little moment between Thorax and Spike.
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Yeah.....I hate this story now. I could've just had Thorax and Spike be Bisexual, but I had to go with that crap.......I might rewrite this entire chapter. It's just fucking cringe..
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I really like the idea of this story but I agree, a rewrite would be incredibly healthy and good for it. Especially since it has a fairly good rating already with all of it's mistakes!
I actually thought that making Thorax agender and asexual was a pretty interesting development. I'd never thought to think about changelings that way but it makes a lot of sense when you put it the way you do. And I think it's great you used the actual terms.
This is a really cute fan fic! I actually read it first on FanFic.net! I really really loved this, Great☆Work!
Good story
This is adorable