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Ice Star


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She was their Princess, their Protector, and their Shield.
None of her subjects would outlast her.
The words to describe the present of a life never-ending were not within her vocabulary—
all she could say was that in this World, no love of hers would ever tarry.


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Comments ( 11 )

Well done.
This is one of those pieces of verse that remains fresh, and gives up its secrets with multiple readings.
Poetry of a thousand words or more I find illusive so props to you!

Damn dude. Very poetic.

7685998 Never mind actually....

Poetry could use some tightening, but with that said, I enjoyed the content.

Lovely poem looking into Celestia. Fitting end. The cut off point of the sentence made me think that the last word said would be a title drop. Begin Again

9975735
That’s exactly what was intended c:

Thank you for this lovely story!
Appreciate the calm, melancholic, happy and sad atmosphere that reads like her thoughts near flowing river in her garden.
Really good atmosphere!

10089046
Thank you for reading! It’s always nice when my poetry gets some attention.

10278137
Oh wow, thank you so much! I hadn't expected this old little piece to get a reading. I'll add it to the description.

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