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Ever since their trip to camp Everfree, Sunset Shimmer and Flash Sentry has rekindled their friendship. All seems well and good but when the two begin to realize something about themselves. The two will work on the issues from their past and also in the present. You know what they say, there's always room for second chances.

This takes place after the Equestria Girls: Legend of Camp Everfree.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 73 )

Sunset only rolls her eyes as she watches her friend going on and off about science this and Timber that. She was happy for her, after the magic games concerning with Midnight Moon and then the whole fiasco with camp Everfree it was nice to see her friend finally relax and enjoy herself.

It was the Friendship Games, not the magic games. And Twilight's alternate self was named Midnight Sparkle, not Midnight Moon.

Other than that, not a bad start. I'll keep an eye on this.

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Ah thanks
I don't why I wrote it like that all fixed now tho :)

7623442 I double checked the story and it still says magic games and midnight moon. Did you remember to save the changes?

It's early days yet but this story has some good signs to show it has potential.

Flashimmer? (Or, y'know, Suntry... or Sunflash... or whatever the heck we're calling it this week, :trixieshiftright:)
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Not bad, I'll my eye on this one.

Great chapter!
I want more....

This is really cute! I would love to see more!:yay:

Me likey story! My likey story! Need more! Need more!:pinkiehappy:

Dude. This is getting even better, keep it up!

Keep it up. I love your style of writing :heart:

this is awesome please do some more :pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

Good nice to see this continuing. I'll be tracking this.

Awesome. Do more please! :pinkiehappy:

Thanx can u do more I really love this story.:twilightblush::heart:

Great story so far! You've got some grammar errors though.

awww that was sooo adorable, can't wait for more

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It came from an Equestria Girls Minis set

Not bad. I'm liking this.

Good to see more. Along with a small reflection of Sunset's past.

I can honestly see Sunset eventually telling Flash that every good thing she does for him is repayment for putting up with her and, most importantly, reaching out to her when she neither wanted nor deserved such consideration. If that doesn't mean that he wants to love her, then I don't know what does.

have a like and fave.

Another good chapter. Keep it up.

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:facehoof: Rainbow Dash........please tell me Twilight flicked her forehead again.

woohoo update

*Rereads Chapter 5*

Oh! Now I think I get it! Sunset's heart is telling her something that she isn't sure she wants to hear and maybe makes her feel a bit vulnerable just knowing!

Rainbow...? Really, you're an asshole sometimes. You're racking up the excuses for people to hit you, you know that, don't you?

Another great chapter for a fantastic story.

I can't belive Rainbow would think Flash would do something like that. Yet i feel she speaks for the part of fandom that doesn't like Flash.

I really like this as they don't suddenly become a couple. Sunset realizing that maybe she has always liked Flash(that scene in rainbow rocks may suggest it). I hope to see the relationship rekindle itself.

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:facehoof: Oh Rainbow, you dunce.

Oh, and great work!

This is a very cute story

“Sup Flash it’s about time you showed up.” Rainbow says.

That's it? No "I'm sorry for punching you for no good reason"? Something like that isn't just swept under the rug you know.

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well no, but it's Rainbow we're talking about. Do you really expect her to go and apologize for it on her own accord? :twilightblush:

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She has before, she should now, this version of her feels a little too... jerkish.

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maybe, but I have a friend who I identify as Rainbow a lot (mostly from show), and depending on the situation she can shrug it off and never really apologize. After enough years of friendship we all just accepted it, knowing if it came as really serious she would apologize or at least look guilty.

Nice use of Discord. From the theme park to the living statue introduction. Honestly I can see this actually working in animation and being the perfect easter egg tie in to pony world Discord's statue reference.

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no leave..jk, probably just the "future" of VR were the room tracks your movement

Wow. I love how you added Sunset's new interest in video games.

Can't there just be a nice romance story without a crazy magic thing happening? It that so much to ask?

I still like the story it's just I was hoping that this was gonna be a normal romance story.

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as long shit don't get to crazy it might be ok

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You tbh this was actually going to be, but then I did some research and found out something interesting.

So let's hope it works out!

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Yeah we'll see I'm going to be seeing if I can hopefully make it work when planning the next chapters but if not chapter 10 maybe be rewritten we'll see

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you can find a way to pull it off, just keep shit from going DBZ on us, we don't need Sunset leveling a mountain too

Okay, calling it now: In a future crisis, Twilight and Pinkie build Flash a real-life magitech battle suit based on his Rise of Tirek character. Sort of a combination of The Falcon and The Winter Soldier.

I think it's obvious Sunset: She's the villain of the film!

Great their needs to be more of these I like the idea of flash and sunset getting back together.

Flash stood in front of Sunset’s door with a small bag over his right eye and another on his left side.

Wow rainbow that's jumping the gun a little too quickly :facehoof:

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