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I clicked through a combination of seeing your name and that eye catching as all heck cover. I mean, look at that thing.
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I need to advertise my taste in both art and gore-related suffering somehow.
A story by Ice Star? What a coincidink, I was just in the neighborhood!
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The neighborhood is forbidden because you will be stabbed.
What? If you say so...
which one comes first Stay Golden or ichor they both say they are both squeals of the other i hate it when this happens
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The description of both makes it clear that they are a NSFW version and a SFW one. I use the sequel function to make them easier to find, and have for other stories with the same situation. Please read the description.
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I’m not sure what this comment is referring to or if it’s in reply to anything.
The cover art has a AK-47, I hope I see one as I read.
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There is a gun, but I didn’t use that kind. I picked one that was more fitting for the setting and level of technology. The cover art was chosen for other reasons, so when was writing I wasn’t sure if I was going to include one at all.
8/10, not enough gore. need moar plz
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Excuse me but I did not expect an actual comment on this story aaaaaa
Also heck, I expected to be told I put too much in!
Hey, is there any chance of this getting an update at some point?
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Whenever I can manage it. I’ve been swamped and sick a lot lately. This is more likely to update soon enough because it’s got some chapters mostly written but in need of editing. Also, finishing.
wait, does this go before or after Ichor ?
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They're the same story, but one is the mature version and one is the teen version. They loop because all my stories that get published this way loop. One does not come after the other. The reader chooses what version they want to read.
Huh. So this is a thing. Part of me suspects that you are going for a mix between Carrie and The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. But something was already off with Marrigold long before she ever took that Amulet.
11523660 I rarely get comments on this story, so this is a treat for me! Also, I've been working on the updates lately too. Very gradually.
Those are both good choices, but admittedly no to both. Any time you see some pony in my stories who fits the spectrum of serial killer/mass murderer, they're vaguely going to have some nods to real serial killers (which often inspire fictional ones). There is a full list of books that I read in the development of this story and during the actual writing process in the author's note of the epilogue. So, if you stick around to see that, (which I hope you do) you'll get to see it. But if you want to know some names on there, the ones I read about for aiding in the development of Marigold were: Albert Fish, Jack the Ripper, the Cleveland Torso Killer, and Ed Gein. Whether those indicate the direction the story is heading in, I will not say. I will confirm that Marigold, despite her more age-to-productivity ratio, is a lust killer, if that isn't apparent already.
Correct. Though I won't ruin my author's foreknowledge and spoil anything about why that may be.
As for the comparisons to Carrie? Since I don't think Marigold's age needs explaining, I'm guessing your thoughts on comparisons to King's book come mostly from her mother, Petunia? After all, Carrie White is an innocent victim up until the very end. She's more of a parable of how some of our contemporary mass killers have come about. Petunia is not based on any one person particularly heavily, nor did any singular mother inspire her. From the early notes of this story (including those that weren't released) and the 2016 version, as short as it was, one can see that Petunia Petals was always intended to be an antagonist in some shape or form. I do occasionally take notes and pull mannerisms from people, but these appear irregularly and often appear in characters without a logical pair -- example: a character who I gave a few mannerisms a friend may have is not likely to be friends with my favorite character in the story, nor will a character analogous to me really exist in the story. I just need inspiration fodder. Petunia Petals happened to have a significant amount of her quirks lifted from my own mother because it suits her and gives her the dysfunction necessary for the story. But Carrie is still a very good guess.
Well dang, the Amulet reached out and got her, pretty much. I do enjoy this story, its bleakness is an interesting change of pace.
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Thank you! I can promise the end won't be totally bleak -- depending on what you count as bleak.
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I only noticed this story because the Fimfiction algorithm made appear the T version the featured list, and the fact that my main yet woefully developmental hell The Symphony of Canterlor is listed as a similar story to this one.
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...how on earth did the t-rated version make the featured list? The rating is currently disabled.
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I have no idea. Or maybe I am confusing it. Point is that I stumbled upon it by chance and one of my works is considered similar by Fimfiction.
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I've found plenty of stories that way before too, and the one you wrote was actually on my read it later for some time. I just don't think stories with ratings disabled are able to get in the feature box.
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I was mistaken. In truth I saw stories up loaded in one of my groups. Basically my curiosity made me jump. Sorry about that.
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Oh, it's fine. I don't usually see group ownership since I add from story pages.
I see her worldviews been made into her mothers
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Something like that. They do have notable differences, but both are similarly heartless and hedonistic.