Shinning Amour and Cadence argue on what to do with Flurry Heart and her cold.
As a writer you ask yourself to dream while you're awake. As an editor you ask yourself how to change a story while leaving it the same.
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Oh god... Poor Shining... Always getting the short end of the stick. Completely whipped, that stallion.
well written.
Ending feels slightly incomplete though.
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I was slightly torn on how to end it, because I thought it could be too abrupt. I kept it though because of the comedic timing. Having the last step show made it where Shining and the audience realize that the single step could've prevented everything.
>>ShadowBlazeCR
hmm, makes sense
Typical housewife drama, what a classic conflict!
That was entertaining
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I laughed my ass off!!!!!
I loved this!
The customer is always right.
The wife is also always right.
Ok, this story was hilarious!
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Love it, poor Shining getting dominated by Alicorns again.😄