"You know... I am a fool. Some blinding fool flying around, pretending not to stop for anyone. Tough ponies like me can't be affectionate. I can't give in to feelings, and I can't say them out loud. But you know... You too are a fool. Acting as if you never needed anypony. So, we are both stupid."
Description at first person, but story at the third person. Can potentially be viewed as a sequel of Bound To You
Loved it! You honestly have done a great job!
Loved it so much! So incredible!
Really nice, and rather fitting for the season too!
Nice rhyme. +1
A few tense and preposition errors, slightly more than I'd put into a comment. If you like I can send them to you in a PM.
Wow! Thank you, thank you, thank you, everyone
I haven't planned a sequel... In fact, I haven't planned anything, it's going to be according to my ideas.
7764637 Yes, I saw them when I re-read it but had no time to fix them... But maybe you have seen some that I've missed, so, that would be with pleasure
D'AWWWWWWWW
... I have no words.
Hey! this is so amazing!
you're a great writer
7765410 U should make a multi-chapter story from these last 2 1 shots!!! I would read it, and a few people are asking 4 sequal(counting me!) And out of all of the fanfics I've read lately, u are the best writer!!!
Good
EMERGENCY!!! HELP ME!!! I'M DYING FROM CUTENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints*
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Hahaha! I'm with you!!!!!
Never fails to make me scream AWE at the end, well written!
In this fics, I'm always asking me like that... Where the hell is Cadence when you need her most??
Oh my gosh, I AM DYING FROM THE ADORABLENESS OF THIS STORY!! MUST REREAD IT!!!