The Dare Queen of All Sleepovers

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shortskirtsandexplosions

shortskirtsandexplosions #1 · Dec 2nd, 2016 · 14 · ·

I'm delighted at this new wave of relatively "happy" futa!fics gracing the digicosmos from your creative furnace. Even if it's a series of silly circumstances, I dig Sunset finding a place where she's "accepted."

Also--despite the last second melodrama--I gotta say that Rarity was the absolute best target. Great mix of erotica and comedy.

Don't ever stop. Please?
-SS&E

ChudoJogurt

ChudoJogurt #2 · Dec 2nd, 2016 · 3 · 1 ·

Dude, or dudette, you write pretty cool stuff, but I just have to say, you utterly abuse word "woman" or "young woman" as a descriptor.
Sorry to nitpick, but it's a real eyesore in fics that I would otherwise enjoy much more.

dracedomino

dracedomino #3 · Dec 2nd, 2016 · · ·

7764719 No argument here, I have a bad habit of repetition with some words for sure. It's something I try to be conscious of but way more still slip in than they should.

RoastPelican

RoastPelican #4 · Dec 2nd, 2016 · · ·

This was pretty great, and I definitely like seeing some light-hearted/happy smut.

One thing that weirded me out a bit (and yes, I realize it's kind of silly for this of all things to be what catches me): Sunset goes from "totally shocked" to "really enthusiastic" remarkably quickly, especially for someone as inexperienced and naive as she's supposed to be. Her hesitation seems to pretty much end as soon as she figures out that the dare isn't a joke.

Not that I want the smut to be delayed by a ton of dithering, but as it is, it's almost jarring.

Ocean Mist

Ocean Mist #5 · Dec 2nd, 2016 · · ·

I have to ask, why dose Dash have a cock? In your other stories they have them because of friendship magic radiation exposure;but here is it never explained.

PiMan

PiMan #6 · Dec 2nd, 2016 · · ·

7765007
There are lots of different explanations for it in stories I've seen. The most common being they were born that way.

dracedomino

dracedomino #7 · Dec 2nd, 2016 · 2 · ·

7765007 Since it's just a one time tale I figured there was no need to go into it. :) Magic, birth, eBay...whichever one you like best!

Ekhidna

Ekhidna #8 · Dec 3rd, 2016 · 2 · ·

This was incredibly tame compared to most of your other stories. But it's just as Unf inducing as all of them. Cheers!

dracedomino

dracedomino #9 · Dec 3rd, 2016 · · ·

7765846 I like doing softer things from time to time, especially if they're still sexy!

Farnham

Farnham #10 · Dec 3rd, 2016 · · ·

That was fantastic, it would be great to see more stories about the crazy antics the girls get up to during their sleepovers.

Ocean Mist

Ocean Mist #11 · Dec 4th, 2016 · 3 · ·

7765550
I'm going to go with Ebay, and a strange package from J-A-Pan.

Patchwork_

Patchwork_ #12 · Dec 24th, 2016 · 4 · ·

I'm surprised there isn't a chapter or story for each of the girls.

Condray

Condray #13 · Dec 26th, 2016 · 2 · ·

7764289 Well I see I'm not the only one on here a lot more comfortable with EqG smut than poni.

Assuming I'm remembering right about which blog I saw something about that on

RoastPelican

RoastPelican #14 · Jan 17th, 2017 · · ·

7764289 The commission coming for me is...well, there are mind control elements, but it starts 100% consensual and is meant to stay light and happy regardless (no one is or can be made to do anything they really object to).

The first chapter is excellent. Look forward to it!

7816499 These things take time.

SolarEclipse912