No... just no

Interesting concept, though I do think you could've done this without the foal-con, say in the castle or barracks, or even a public bath house

7789256 Yeah. Might have been better to start there and work my way up.

My thoughts? More!

So, I've only read the first chapter yet, but I still wanted to share my thoughts on this fic.
The concept of the alicorns actually being evil mind-bending tyrants and using their absolute power for sexy times is really great. I also like the undertones of corruption indicating that the Dominance spell itself has been playing a part in turning the alicorns down this dark path.
It's just such a shame that the story immediately ruins it's fantastic premise with foalcon. Even if I wasn't repulsed by the fetish itself, with this sort of story I was expecting a more gradual decent into depravity as Twilight was corrupted by this power. Instead the story kicks things off with her already jumping off the deep end. Where do you go from here? Unless this fic is going full HeadlessRainbow with the sex acts...

Anyways, I think I'll keep reading just to see where Twilight goes from here. Since it's pretty clear that the spell can influence other alicorns too, I kinda want to see Twilight pull a reversal on the other Princesses. They deserve to be bent into submissive slaves for Twilight to do with as she pleases.

7790648 Unfortunately, that does seem to be the consensus that I jumped in the deep end too quickly. There is less focus on the foals later on, as well as some interesting history about this world, so that's something to look forward to.

This is fucked up on so many levels.
But... please, continue.