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"Friendship is an island that you retreat to. And you fall on the floor and laugh at all the ninnies who don't have enough brains to have your good taste." --Ray Bradbury

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(This is a E for Everyone companion piece to the M for Mature story, "The Unraveled World". It contains none of the violence and death, but has several spoilers.)

The Unraveled World needs hope for the future and Guiding Light is the priest that can give it to them.
What he preaches and what he practices, however, are not the same thing at all. Pinksworth and Spring Step investigate this pony of the cloth and discover his true motives.

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"Celestiast Priest"

Wouldn't the correct grammar be "Celestial Priest" or "Celestrian Police"?

8144293 "Celestrian Police" makes Guiding Light sound like a cop. "Celestial Priest" sounds better, but it's a bit late for a change. Hey, at you least commented on my story, so for that, I thank you.

8145503 I meant to say Celestrian Priest. Bloody autocorrect.

8145503 Also, how is it late? It's not like there are rules against editing your work and using the Find And Replace function on all instances of a word you want replaced with a different word.

*Grumbles* It certainly worked for The Farce Awakens...

8146151 You're probably right. I'll work on it when I can, but I'm uber-busy right now. Thanks for the input. I really appreciate it.

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