Anonymous has lived in Equestria for seven long years. It has taken him all those years years to finally try dating outside of his species, only how does one go about it? Hopefully his closest friend Rarity will be able to help.
Picture credit to AnonPencil
I like the way you write how the feelings and thoughts Rarity is having are so tumultuous.
Hey I drew that!
Seriously though, this is a curious story so far, and I'm curious as to where it's going to end up. Rarity definitely seems to be in an uneasy spot... buuuut I have a feeling she'll come around. :)
Oh no!
I love the tension
Happy end? No way!
That's not a very encouraging thought! In fact, that's about as far away from an encouraging thought as an encouraging thought can get!
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When I read this I just had to laugh at the imagination alone. The wtf look of the protagonist while Rarity looks at him with a big adorable smile.
I don't read that as him asking out rarity.
Just him asking for help.
And she just shoots him down?
It was quite a nice day as he watched Cranky and Matilda waltz on by.
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Jeez, that's quite a hilarious one to miss.
The story and buildup is appreciated.
While a one-shot can deliver a good story in a quick punch, sometimes a slower progressive is what the story needs.
In particular the spa scenes were enjoyable to read. It's actually nice to read a spa scene which doesn't involve a factor of porn. Just a spa pony service with some conversation on the side.
Normally in these stories ponies dating other species is widely accepted, so I like how you've changed things up and created some interesting complications.
Very Wholesome ending. Half expected a confession at the end but am pleasantly surprised. Would love to know if this story had a squeal, or is going to
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It's an ongoing. I'm roughly halfway done with the next chapter.
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Can't wait mate. This is getting really good! What originally inspired this idea. By the way?
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I was reading some romance stuff and thought how I've never read one where the interspecies thing was an issue. At least not one that's not resolved in a single chapter.
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I do recall one Derpy story where that was the main conflict. Anon lives in with Derpy and her daughter as a mail man, and when they get drunk and he refuses to the deed with her, Derpy flees heart broken as Anon has to take care of her daughter and realize what he did.
It has a happy ending, no worries.
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What’s that story called?
¿Entonces? ¿Continúa o no?
Sad it’s cancelled