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"Getting Pumped"
Memes...
part two with twilight dominating AJ and RD when
A much more realistic ending than most stories, that's for sure.
7891282
Yeah, ultimately I want pony society to be a place where people are nice to each other, and in cases like this, that means having some consequences when people are harmed.
7891266
In the Friendship Dungeon, Mistress Twilight's word is law.
"This story contains very rough sex, including damage to the body."
This speaks to me. :v
I'm not crazy about physical harm, though agreed that it's a much more realistic take than most.... but that being said, futa mares 'sharing the love' with their human guests hits in all the right places. And I can appreciate the idea of sex with a certain element of consequence.
Especially loved AJ's dirty talk; thanks to her personality, it hit exactly the right level of "casually dominating" : implying total ownership, mastery, and sexual control, but in a really relaxed, calm, um-aggressive way. She's not being mean; she's just not going to pretend you're anything but her cock sock, either.
All in all, you once again do not disappoint, MassDriver.
note to self read description before reading
This story hit me in all the right places, thanks for making it and kudos to you!
After actually reading, I'm still mostly approve. It had that really annoying trope that always pisses me off. The "Getting raped but then (it's ok because) enjoying it" one. Other than that though, no complaints. Loved it~
7892174 Yeah, I understand the frustration. The scenario is meant to fit a certain fantasy, where one party ignores consent but gives the other party exactly what they secretly want. It totally ignores the realities of consent in order to deliver on that fantasy.
I'm not sure I'd be comfortable approaching a more realistic rape scenario, though.
wow. briliently written, maybe a good start to a small series about these three
7892211 It's fine. Few are :<
I just don't personally find the appeal in advertising things as rapey only to drive it back into consent territory at the last second. Barring mind break (or I guess netorare/cuckolding maybe), I don't really see the difference between just not having it be consensual rough sex the whole time.
Did he pass out in the end there? Or go deaf? That must have been some insane gang banging
Good job man 
This story was hawt, and made me smile. Good job.
... This has just left me wanting to see a clop scene with the human and Derpy.
7892814
I couldn't help but notice that it wasn't specified whether she was futa or not. Could be she just wants some of that sweet human cock.
7893045 That's why I'm left wanting her.
I love how this short story turned out. And I like how you left a space for ideas on how Twilight gonna punish her friends, lol. Yey for the Sex Dungeon Justice. I mean her castle maybe isnt as big as Celestial's but it should have at least one small dungeon for punishments.
Besides the futa part I was able to enjoy the story and the setup. Coincidentally I was imagined the same hight differents between the anthro ponies and humans, the rest was a different story in tirly
So, huh... In 'this' dimension, everyone MUST sign a non-liability contract of some sort before crossing into 'this' Equestria, right ? Otherwise, this sound like ''forced sex on people'' stuff and, well, you know, there tends to be laws against that in the Human world and all. *shrug* Heh?
7893057 I'd like to think things could work out between him and Derpy, so I figure she would either have no dick, or one that's embarrassingly small by Equestrian standards. But perfect for a human!
more chapters of this
7904601 Ithink Derpy sould not be a futa.and that AJ and RD sould be punished bying fuck by turn futa by Magic Tia, Luna,Twilight and a good Changeling and they all have the four. biggest. dicks in all of Equestria.
Feels like there is more.
7907562
>Less futa
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Have a downvote for the unnecessary rape. The forced sex felt just that. Forced. There was no need. He clearly said no, they did it anyway. Not cool.
7911059 That's fair. I've edited the description to make it clear that the story contains non-consensual sex. I understand that your problem is with the content itself, not its labeling, but this should at least help prevent people from stumbling across something they find distasteful.
welll uh....
The moment i saw Aj i was hooked....
was not dissappointed...at all....
boy...that was.... something
Written decently, if not Stockholm Syndrome-y.
I'm still on the fence as to whether the epilogue leaves the story in a worse state than it would be without it. I appreciate that you actually leave it ending in a way that doesn't make AJ and RD read like complete and utter rapists, but it falls short in a few regards. Twilight says that AJ and RD regret what they did, but beyond her few words in the letter, there isn't any indication from them that there was any remorse; no visit, no cards, nothing. It's especially damning when the rest of the six sent Get Well cards, but not a peep from the ones that actually fucked this man up. It makes the ending feel unfinished, in a way. The punishment aspect helps the ending, but what good is it if they didn't actually learn anything?
7936544
Yeah, I feel weird about the message the epilogue sends. I wanted for there to be consequences, but I didn't want to make them too harsh or too lenient, so I landed in a weird, sort of vague middle ground.
If it helps, the absence of letters from RD and AJ are meant to suggest that they're not ready to face the person they wronged, and that their apologies will be delivered after they've done some kind of atonement. But it's my fault if that didn't come across in the story.
At any rate, I appreciate the feedback.
7936814
Okay, so they're still redeemable... Maybe. Would make for some heavy duty atonement if you ever decide to expand this.
7936814 dude I just don't know how to think about this story man. of course I would like to see some sort of punishment on humanities side because these mares forced themselves onto this human and in practice raped him and nearly killed him with their dicks. A good story but a weird message that it portrayed to its audience.
This story made me cringe at the images I imagined afterword's on the aftermath when I went to bed last night. This one is going to be on my mind for awhile now.
So in his world futas don't exist?
The world needs more of this. The non-con part was kinda of a turn off, as was the bodily damage, but the first one can be avoided by, you know, talking. And the second by magic.
7898966
Then don't read it?
You may as well go to a gay fic and complain that there's guys having sex with each other
7911059
It's fairly evident it isn't tolerated there anyway
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8533667
What a well formulated, highly sophisticated and equally detailed rebuttal. Your white knighting is admirable.
Wow....this guy got FUCKIN' DESTROYED.
Could you please add the non-con tag now that it exists?
I didn't dislike, since you put it in the description, but y'know.
Snowflake fags
Squel?
So will this get a sequel?
Needs a sequel.
This story still needs some resolution. And NOT the kind where the main character decides he loves getting raped.
Not a fan of bodily harm, but at least it's remediable.