Twilight and Rarity discover human prank toys don't mix well with unicorns.
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Awesome. Nice, quick bit of humor. Have a like.
Pffft. I had no idea you'd actually make a fic out of this.
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You underestimated me!
Lulz
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This is amazing.
This is just too much! My laughter is off the charts!
And Twilight learned a valuable lesson - all the knowledge in the world is useless when, if you need to do something, one or more from the necessary party is panicking.
And indeed, Dashie just had to make it weird, huh?
Nice quick story, deserves a like
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This was amazing, Cinna. I always get a kick out of your flash fic ideas.
I would add an certain Admiral here, but that would be too cliche.
So I won't do it.
Is that the Equestrian Pinkie or is it the EQG Pinkie, we may never know.
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It was a Pinkie, and that was enough. Some would say too much.
Rarity! Twilight! Just pour as much magic as you can into the trap!
Let the power fill you! Let it seep into your thighs and penetrate your body!
Yes! Let it build up! Then RELEASE!!!
7912857 DOCTOR OCTO-MOTHER-FUCKING-GONAPUS! BLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
I lost it
Quite amusing. I enjoyed Rainbow's point of view in this, and it's what really made the story amusing, in my opinion at least.
7913425 Come my Twilight, you have much to learn! -Molestia
Dunno why this was in the right sidebar on the main page, and not in the 'Featured' box.
This is seriously good.
As Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door would say (if the Stars weren't gemstones), You got a Golden Star!
Rainbow Dash has forgotten about the Minotaur race.
The subject matter needs to happen in-show.
An imaginary moment:
Shortly thereafter, Shining armor requested a large order of said, "Chinese Finger Traps" for use in law enforcement.
Alrighty so where to begin with this.
First the good. I loved the story cute short and above all flowing like a stream. It never felt like it was dragging on and everything was smooth. The characters were great you managed to get the PINK ONE just weird and omnipresent, which isn't an easy task given she is the PINK ONE. I liked Rainbow Dash's character as well.
Cons: While everyone else was at least in character Rarity was not and that standing in glaring contrast to the others really stands out. Also one spelling mistake. That's it.
Bend down should be Bent down.