Leaving Crystal Prep meant turning her back on all sorts of college money, but Sci-Twi is a smart girl with a smart solution: start working at a local glory hole.
I agree on the best Fluttershy part here. She was rather nice and degrading to Twilight, and I always love such things!
Though I will admit that I'm a tad disappointed that the story is complete. I was hoping for a longer story with chapters of each of her friends using her. And I was also disappointed at this open ending. Twilight was not revealed for being the cocksucking whore she was in this, and neither was explained how the girls are having so much money to spend on Twilight's delicious glory blowjobs. So I'm really hoping for a sequel of this delicious glory debauchery!
That was certainly hot, but you're ending it here? It seems a little soon to end it, with clop possibilities aplenty left to explore with the other characters. Are you planning a sequel expanding the series a bit more, maybe with Twilight confronting her friends on this?
I'm glad people liked it and want to see more chapters of it. :) This was a commission; however, and right now there isn't anything in the plans for future additions. So if it seems like it ends prematurely or if it's rushed or something similar, that's why.
Comment posted by RoastPelican deleted Sep 4th, 2017
I was okay with the abusive language- but not tipping? That's ridiculous. Of all the things that I'm alright with that is surprisingly not one of them.
I do wonder how Fluttershy would react to learning Twilight's the glory hole girl? I feel like it's an even chance of apologizing and never going back to the glory hole, or doubling down and treating Twilight with her bitch-dom persona in person. I could go with either, personally.
It'd be great if this were to receive a sequel at some point, it was a very nice read admittedly. And I can't say that I'm even remotely surprised by the demeanor given to Fluttershy, but that didn't make it any less enjoyable.
I look forward to reading any other story you create/have created.
8014379 Totally agree with you there. Fluttershy being a bitch didn't really bother me. That could easily be explained away as her just venting anger and frustration. But not paying? That's fucked up. And kinda pisses me off.
Well somebody certainly has good taste in role-models
Seemed rushed and short i expected each chapter to focus on each girl.
Already? That was fast; it was really starting to get good.
Mmmmmm, very hot!
I have a feeling that some of her friends already know it's Twilight behind that glory hole. They just don't want to ruin a good thing.
Was totally expecting Fluttershy to call Twilight by her name, at some point.
I agree on the best Fluttershy part here. She was rather nice and degrading to Twilight, and I always love such things!
Though I will admit that I'm a tad disappointed that the story is complete. I was hoping for a longer story with chapters of each of her friends using her. And I was also disappointed at this open ending. Twilight was not revealed for being the cocksucking whore she was in this, and neither was explained how the girls are having so much money to spend on Twilight's delicious glory blowjobs. So I'm really hoping for a sequel of this delicious glory debauchery!
Flutterbitch.
That was certainly hot, but you're ending it here? It seems a little soon to end it, with clop possibilities aplenty left to explore with the other characters. Are you planning a sequel expanding the series a bit more, maybe with Twilight confronting her friends on this?
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That's a bitch ass move, Flutters.
New chapter?! Oh hell yes!
I'm glad people liked it and want to see more chapters of it. :) This was a commission; however, and right now there isn't anything in the plans for future additions. So if it seems like it ends prematurely or if it's rushed or something similar, that's why.
I read the comment about it being a commission, but I really wish you'd keep it going.
I was okay with the abusive language- but not tipping? That's ridiculous. Of all the things that I'm alright with that is surprisingly not one of them.
8008054 I'd like to see another chapter as well... Maybe some day we'll get one if we are lucky...
Would love to see the reveal. You'll end by making me commission you, Mr Domino
Most interesting... yes indeed.
Heh, was expecting the bonus action Flutters gave to out Twilight in a certain way. Still, pretty hot.
7997685 Yeah. Kinda sad as now the story is over and no more sexiness
Damn shame this is over, I really liked it.
down her thighs is messy, wet waves
it should say in not is
I do wonder how Fluttershy would react to learning Twilight's the glory hole girl? I feel like it's an even chance of apologizing and never going back to the glory hole, or doubling down and treating Twilight with her bitch-dom persona in person. I could go with either, personally.
It'd be great if this were to receive a sequel at some point, it was a very nice read admittedly. And I can't say that I'm even remotely surprised by the demeanor given to Fluttershy, but that didn't make it any less enjoyable.
I look forward to reading any other story you create/have created.
Uh.. sci-Twi... there's a problem with your new scheme, one measured in contraceptive failure rates and medical bills....
Twilight is a genius at business.
Fluttershy's cock is the highlight of this whole story for me
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Totally agree with you there. Fluttershy being a bitch didn't really bother me. That could easily be explained away as her just venting anger and frustration. But not paying? That's fucked up. And kinda pisses me off.
It should be 50℅ now the rest when she finishes.
That's a assertive Fluttershy.
A great story it saddens me that this is the only story with a dominant futa fluttershy but its a good story so that makes up for the lack of them
It's always the quiet ones.