"Oh oh no no! Take it out!" she pleaded from her side on the table.
"Nooo," Cadance groaned in growing discomfort.
"Please, please, no more!" Cadance begged.
"OW! It hurts! It hurts!" Cadance cried.
All she could do was lay there and whimper like a sad puppy.
Uh... when a girl says no... It might be a good idea to mention that there's a little bit of non-consensual action at the top of the chapter. I was fine with the enema part, but this really bordered the line.
Uh... when a girl says no... It might be a good idea to mention that there's a little bit of non-consensual action at the top of the chapter. I was fine with the enema part, but this really bordered the line.
Everyone has his or her own kinks.
100% my favorite line so far.
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Capitalize Lotus
Add a period after "release", though that may just be a stylistic choice in this situation.
Remove "all the while", it's very repetitive.