I have been forgotten and abused left behind and laughed at by the people I call my friends. The mane 6 are some of the most well know people in equestria who have saved equestria many times. But what happens when that friendship is threatened by there past mistakes and forgetfulness of one of there friends. Well..... let's find out.
Are you talking about Spike or Discord? I haven't read the story yet, so I just want to make sure... 7965618 Who is Jason? Do you mean Jason Voorhees?
Even though there are plenty of annoying... typos? Spelling errors? Grammar errors? For example: "...but a Seth thing will be answered in due time but form one how about...", which I guess should have been "...but everything will be answered in due time. For now, how about..." , it was another good chapter, and makes me wait eagerly as to figuring out whether this is truly a friend or a foe, since it's quite possible for Celestia to have banished the whole practice of her magic simply because it's dangerous, or that she had bad experiences of it, or even because she ONLY saw the worst side of it, while also leaving the potential for her to simply be manipulating Spike for her own personal gains...
Good chapter! Just make sure you improve on your spelling and grammar, it will make the story a lot better and easier to read.
7993190 I agree. I'm hoping there is more to this to this "Misty" character. Perhaps she will be the cause of Spike's thoughts being plagued with hate.
Are you talking about Spike or Discord? I haven't read the story yet, so I just want to make sure...
7965618 Who is Jason? Do you mean Jason Voorhees?
please continue
Watch it end up being a stalker
I hope Misty is not a typical villain. This a good chapter.
Even though there are plenty of annoying... typos? Spelling errors? Grammar errors? For example: "...but a Seth thing will be answered in due time but form one how about...", which I guess should have been "...but everything will be answered in due time. For now, how about..." , it was another good chapter, and makes me wait eagerly as to figuring out whether this is truly a friend or a foe, since it's quite possible for Celestia to have banished the whole practice of her magic simply because it's dangerous, or that she had bad experiences of it, or even because she ONLY saw the worst side of it, while also leaving the potential for her to simply be manipulating Spike for her own personal gains...
either way, I can't wait to see where this goes
I apologize for the errors I will try and make my chapter a little more correct next time but thank you anyway.
Good chapter! Just make sure you improve on your spelling and grammar, it will make the story a lot better and easier to read.
7993190 I agree. I'm hoping there is more to this to this "Misty" character. Perhaps she will be the cause of Spike's thoughts being plagued with hate.
Keeps getting All the more interesting and I really like this Misty character