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Emerald Omen


I like writing, plain and simple. I've been doing it for at least ten years, and I love sharing my work with others. Mostly clopfics here, but some other stuff too.

Comments ( 14 )

This was great I'd love to see more of this.

*sees the knife*
Nope:twilightoops:

7994038 Well I am a busy person, but I always try to do some writing in my free time. I'll have more pony x Anon out when I can!

7994747 Hey I understand I'm the same. I'm juggling real life stuff with my writing and I'm in no rush for you to put something out right now, so take your time and deal with your stuff first before doing anything story related.

*<>* we say the pacing for the story was up n down...especially around cloppy bits ...we get its a condensed version to cover main idea without all the fluff ...but some fluff is good fluff ... Maybe if this was reworked into more than one chapter format then all the issues you feel this fic has would iron themselves out

I quite enjoyed it and I thank you for writing this story. Keep up the great work.

7998936
I came down here to comment nearly exactly this. So consider this seconded. Good fic, issues could be fixed by adding some fluff and reformatting to fix the pacing.

Not bad man! At first I thought it was gonna be a an all out sex orgy with the princess's and Octavia , this one caught me by suprise xD

continue please ?:fluttercry:

The only issue I had with this was the warning from the princess'. I doubt Celestia, Luna, and Cadence are all gonna meet up just to tell us about the birds and the bees pony edition. Otherwise? Not bad.

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I didn't know if some people would know what "Heat" was, that was mainly the only reason I included that part. I agree with you now, looking back on it. I'm glad you liked it otherwise!

Comment posted by Dashnyymi deleted Apr 28th, 2019
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