I'm here to write my way into your hearts and infect your minds.
Filly rarity always had a thing for clothing, but it wasn't always as well tailored.
There were many things she did, and wanted to do, with her life before she found that boulder and got her cutie mark.
This is one of them.
Inspired by one of the many stories by Evictus. This one was a specific spelling error that made me laugh.
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Then why would you post it?
Short, cute, I like it. Though, you probably should clean it up a bit before too long.
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That's why. I just wanted it out for the world to see how I write at a fundamental level.
Plus, I don't like Rarity. In my opinion, she deserves to not be in an edited story of mine. (burn)
Honestly not bad for a rough draft. I think you should clean it up, as it's a cute little story that deserves it.
We all have our preferences. Not everyone likes the same characters. Rarity is my favourite of the Mane 6 by far, and my 2nd favourite pony after Sunset Shimmer. Meanwhile, I have a hard time liking Rainbow Dash because her personality is diametrically opposed to mine.
I really don't know what to say about this short.
Filly rarity ok , “Soon, I’ll have grown my own line of clothes,” even as a filly rarity is not that slow.
to be honest this story has possibility after a good over hall.
this is a good idea on how to clear your mind and I do know of a few authors that use this technique.
but you should have stuck this story aside and finished it first.
and before you start yes I know my spelling sucks and my fazing is no better.
and please drop using so many large words you need to remember not every one hear is old enough to understand them.
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