Spanish is my first language, and I have no real experience with English grammar. So I hope you understand and forgive my mistakes in translating my stories.
Who doesn't know Rainbow Dash? The fastest pegasus of Equestria, the best flying that exists, representation of the loyalty, undisputed star of the Wonder Bolts. Everypony knows her amazing mane of rainbow color, her intense fur coloring of the sky, the same color of her right wing, and the soft yellow color of her left wing.
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Excellent story! I loved it! I can definately see Fluttershy doing that for Rainbow Dash too. The only mistake I saw is that half the time Rainbow Dash is referred to using he and him.
8059292 Really? I'm sorry, I speak Spanish and I translate it to upload it here, I thought I had arranged all "he" and "him", I got it fixed.
I'm glad you liked it, I was very pleased to write it too
8059687 I'm glad that it was fun to write. I look forward to more stories from you.
It's a nice idea, but it's got too many grammatical errors for me to favorite it.
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Thank you. I know my translation has many errors, but I hope the story is nice anyway n_n
Once I get home, I may have the time to rewrite the story for you. I've recently begun rewriting stories for struggling authors, and I can tell that this story definitely has potential.
8068280 Well... Not exactly a real rewrite, but editing the story for grammatical errors. Rewrites are for stories that are far more broken.
8070181 It would help me, thanks n_n
You know, everything would have been easier to explain if Rainbow got a robotic wing. Sorry, but Fluttershy will never fly again.
8/10 very well cut onions marred only by some bad grammer. Nice story.