Everyone deserves a second chance.
That's what Twilight Sparkle told them when she first came over, and left a broken, remorseful Sunset Shimmer in their tender care. Taking her words to heart, they took her into their circle friends, giving her a gift that can't be priced... a gift that saved them in their darkest hour against their worst foes yet.
Months later, Sunset Shimmer is a changed mare, and the Rainbooms are finally, seemingly, able to rest on their laurels. Until, an old foe returns... but not the same as she was before. Things have changed, and the Rainbooms may have another chance to give the gift that had so enriched their own lives... and restore hope to someone who feels as though deserve nothing.
This is an excellent story. I can't wait to see more.
I like it so far! Very well written. Looking forward to the next chapter!
OMG! This is great! I could practically feel the emotion off of each character! Well done and well written! Please update this again soon? I'd love to see what'll happen next! What lies in store for the former Sirens? Till then!
have alike and a follow. this is one terrific story! well done!
This story won't have a "Sonata is just misguided" retcon, right?
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No. That's not a redemption.
I want more.
I am highly intrigued here
OMG! This was great! I hope to see more! Please update again soon!!!!
Fave.
It's great to see another chapter of this story. I hope you continue!
It not dead!!!! please not stop this story!
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I have no intention of stopping
what a beautifuly done chapter! it is so moving and powerful. each chapter v is well worth the wait.
Very emotional chapter! Flutters is such a kind person.
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She sure is
*sniffle* THIS WAS SO EMOTIONAL!!! I just loved Fluttershy’s and Sonata’s interaction! Great work!
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Thank you. I was honestly a bit worried how folks would receive this one. Feels good to get positive feedback.
I think this is shaping up to be one of the best Dazzling redemption stories I've read yet. On an unrelated note, I've not read many; probably 10-13 at most.
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I hope it holds up that way. Thanks
I'm not crying... i'm not crying... I'm not crying... Instead I'm crying!
Good job, this chapter was, as Frank West would say, Fantastic! I hope to read the next chapters as soon as possible, because in my opinion this story has a lot of potential.
Nice.
beautiful just beautiful,that was one powerful and moving chapter! well done!
All I can say is, is that I can't wait for more
Really liking how this is going so far. You really humanize Sonata and make me feel for what she's going through. And the fact that Fluttershy's the one that reaches out to her the most makes it even better; I'd expect nothing less than for her to give a former villain the benefit of the doubt. Hope to see this continue, cuz I like how it's going.
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Thanks Blaze
She's talking about VeggieTales in the tale of Jonah and he was being played by an asparagus
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I know, my GF is a fan. This passage is a little joking reference.
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I used to be a fan myself when I was a kid, I for one think VeggieTales is a classic that won't be able to die off that easy
Finished as in this over now?
or.
Finished the chapter?
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One more chapter to go.
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Okay
Sweet! Another chapter!
Good for Sonata for convincing her sisters to join in! She really come a long way!
Excellent. =)
The talk between Sonata and her sisters was very well done. Poor Adagio just wanted to be strong for her sisters. She really does have a heart after all.
Glad to see they're accepting the Rainbooms' offer of help. If their friendship could work for Sunset, surely it'll help for them. =)
Amazing chapter, and story in general, but it is still makred Incomplete
Incredible, heartwarming ending to such a great story. Well done. =)
it ends here?
aww
at least it sounds like there's a sequel coming
What an amazing wnd yo an amazing story!
This is a beautiful ending.
well done to youon this great story.
Very well done
This was fantastic, definitely worth the wait and I can't wait to see what you have planned for the future
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Thank you
Great story! Looking forward to the next one.