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TooShyShy


Fan fiction. The final frontier.

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Lyra Heartstrings, occupation: S T R A N G E W I Z A R D.

Bon Bon is lucky she has secret agent training. This is perfect.

What is it with Lyra and her obsession with strange otherworldly creatures? Is she part of some secret cult or something? :rainbowlaugh:

Well this was great, i really like this version of Lyra and Bonbon, though i wonder to what lengths they would have to go to have a foal together if Bonbon didn't change her mind , flesh sculpting maybe?, either way i loved how at the end it was Lyra reminiscing about her own child hood that made Bonbon realize that this was a bad idea, either way you did a good job on this.

I though Bon Bon was the one with secrets...

Kakaza #5 · May 6th, 2017 · · 1 ·

This is amazing, well done! I love your characterization of Lyra and Bon Bon, though the best friend thing didn't make much sense to me, since the rest of the story seemed to be written as if they were married. That's how it came across to me, anyway.

Starts with "F", and ends with "L"?

"FUCKING STUPID IMBECIEL!!!!"

I hate gay pony stories and shipping :flutterrage:

(Edit: I was expecting a bunch of "Gay pony Lovers" to dislike this comment like hell :trollestia:)

Glad to see I'm not the only one with a non-human obsessed take on Lyra.

Well, that was a very different path for Lyra. Pretty funny overall, I enjoyed. Brings me back to playing the Blood Magic mod in Minecraft and summoning all sorts of unwholesome things. Good times!

8144056 So, imagine that this is a group of people standing around politely discussing the story in person. You just did the equivalent of running up to that group and screaming profanity at the author. People do tend to consider that rude. You don't have to like or agree with the story, but you do need to be civil if you choose to respond to it.

You might want to read up on the rules of the site a bit: https://www.fimfiction.net/rules

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Not helping their case is their inability to even spell the word 'imbecile'.

8144056

You spelled imbecile wrong. :twilightoops:

8145905

Ooooh I see now...you're a troll. :trixieshiftleft: do you know how old those are getting? Your kind has become so...stale. So boring. So predictable. If you're going to insult a work at least be a little more creative. That was just disappointing. Like, "I'm not even mad" kind of disappointing. You're a disappointment to trolls everywhere. You should be ashamed.

8145971 I'm no troll, ima Ger-Mane General disguised as a troll....

(Edit: I'm part of the "Anti-Gay pony Society)

I love this version of Lyra! At least this version doesn't talk about HANDS all the time.

Did I remember to exorcise the toaster this morning? Lyra wondered.

And that just reminded me of. . .

Now I need to find more of necromancer Lyra.

I've fallen in love with Lovecraftian Necromancer Lyra <3

This was a very well written story. But I didn't like it very much. Don't get me wrong it's a very good story and all, But it just doesn't play much to my tastes. But aside from that it has a good plot, Good characters and character development, And good pacing. Keep up the good work.

Wonderful stuff. I quite like this Lyra, and the narrowly averted crisis that was her nearly discovering maternal instincts more commonly exhibited by Shub-Niggurath. Thank you for this.

Know what else starts with F and ends with L? Fantastical!

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