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Doof Ex Machina


O this dark world in which one day I’ll die.

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This is gonna be another completely regular day. One of sunshine and rainbows.


This work is a translation of a Russian story. The author doesn’t know English well and gave his explicit permission to translate and post the story. The translation is an independent work of fiction, and does not constitute theft, self-appropriation of authorship, or disrespect for the work of the original writer.
Edited and preread by Absolution and krdragon.

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Comments ( 6 )

This fic is really good, but it doesn’t have anything to do with Littlepip.

9037418
Thanks! Though I must say there is a couple of things in the text that can give a little hint on Littlepip's involvement.

There were no clouds beneath him.

A gust of wind abruptly raised his head up, and there he saw two rainbows, the one which he had seen in the morning and the other that seemed to appear quite recently.

That a sucky ending, Found his place only to get goaled in the head by rebar.

Decent to strong 7 Этот комментарий был проспонсирован Небронем Kappa

9039581
Ooh, complicated ratings! А мы Неброня всё ждали.

Decent enough fanfic with a dark ending. I hot king is it didn’t feel too Fallout Equestria-y - Fluttershy does very litte here and aside from the location and the implications of Littlepip’s involvement, it does feel like a “children play hoofball” story with a dark twist.

It’s decent enough otherwise so keep up the good work.

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