What happens when you can't fulfill a Pinkie Promise? Do the skies tear apart leaving the wake of destruction for the universe? Do the friendships once held together by forces stronger than time itself break apart like a fragile glass figurine shattering into pieces? The answer is simple, you lose a friend, forever.
Uhh... That was an interesting way to end a story. Wheredid this ever happen in "This Day in Aria"?
Rarity would not say cheap more likely reasonably priced
Pino Graham, I didn't think it would sound good if Rarity said, "Welcome to Carousel Boutique, where everything is reasonably priced, unique, and magnufic!" It just doesn't sound right at all.
I liked the story but you should consider making the end longer. Pretty good though
Sorry for your loss, man.
There was too much use of the word "clop"...