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Admiral Biscuit


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This story is a sequel to Admiral Trampoline Super Biscuit Shouldn't Write Shipfics, Volume I


Once upon a time in a universe far, far away, two or three or five or some nonzero quantity of magic diminutive horses came together and fell in love and then unfortunately produced offspring who chronicled the way in which their parents met.

This is their story.


Trigger Warning: An EFNW collaborative project with Super Biscuit and Admiral Trampoline. We're not sorry.

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Comments ( 31 )

... I'm going to regret asking you what that Latin phrase translates to.

...

I'm just gonna... hide under a table and cry...

Yeah.

and they were all out of bubblegum.

You should add a drama tag! Jeez! Warn people before writting dark thing like that.

Do you realize you didn't call this Volume II? They're both Volume 1...

Wait, they both link to each other? How can you even... bwah?

If you break fimfic with this I'm telling Knighty.

This was definitely a thing that happened. You two may need to stay in separate states for the rest of your lives. We ill need another Superal Biscoline.

why is thisa not fetured allreDAY ++++11111111 omg bbq MY LIFE is now complete!!!!

It is better to forget, it is pointless to remember. No one will believe you. You will have spoken a heresy. You will be outcast.

Sweet seapony tears and provalone, I can't even get enough words to described how confused, awed, and mentally f:scootangel:ed I am all at the same time.

Also, DAMMIT! You idiots created a reciprocating loop by linking your stories to each other. You're going to break the universe worse than if the rest of the Mane 6 ever went to the EqG universe. Oh, crap, does this comment need an Equestria Girls tag?

That has to be the strangest and yet funniest thing I've read, like ever! Thanks for the laugh.

And next time, invite me, too!

This feels like the literary equivalent of taking a dump in a paper bag and setting it on someone's doorstep and ringing the bell and then when the person opens the door and looks in the bag there's not even half a log in the bag and the first guy is just standing on the sidewalk in plain view staring at the house.

This is definitely a you story

both of you

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... I'm going to regret asking you what that Latin phrase translates to.

Technically [according to Google], 'in the act of wrongdoing,' although it usually applies to 'in the act of sex.'

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You should add a drama tag! Jeez! Warn people before writting dark thing like that.

:rainbowlaugh:

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Probably the safest thing to do.

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oh god there's another one

We're not sorry. :trollestia:

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1000 words exactly.
I <tiny text> approve

I thought about adding some more words, but really, would that have been an improvement?

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Do you realize you didn't call this Volume II? They're both Volume 1...

Yes, they are. And the story descriptions are identical . . .

Wait, they both link to each other? How can you even... bwah?

It's like looking into a mirror . . .

If you break fimfic with this I'm telling Knighty.

That's fair.

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This was definitely a thing that happened. You two may need to stay in separate states for the rest of your lives. We ill need another Superal Biscoline.

:rainbowlaugh:
I dunno about Super Trampoline, but I can write crackfics with anybody.

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why is thisa not fetured allreDAY ++++11111111 omg bbq MY LIFE is now complete!!!!

I know, right? I guess some people don't know real quality stories when they see them.

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It is better to forget, it is pointless to remember. No one will believe you. You will have spoken a heresy. You will be outcast.

At least I had fun. :rainbowwild:

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Sweet seapony tears and provalone, I can't even get enough words to described how confused, awed, and mentally f:scootangel:ed I am all at the same time.

I can totally understand that. I kinda felt the same, and I wrote half of the story.

Also, DAMMIT! You idiots created a reciprocating loop by linking your stories to each other. You're going to break the universe worse than if the rest of the Mane 6 ever went to the EqG universe. Oh, crap, does this comment need an Equestria Girls tag?

Sooner or later, the two stories are going to go into a death spiral, and then they'll collapse upon themselves. Since they're short, they probably won't have enough pull to bring down FimFic, but they might suck some other bad romances in with them.

Also, I think you're safe without the EqG tag. Hopefully.

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That has to be the strangest and yet funniest thing I've read, like ever! Thanks for the laugh.

Thanks!

And next time, invite me, too!

Next year we totally ought to have a giant EFNW collab. Because that would be awesome.

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This feels like the literary equivalent of taking a dump in a paper bag and setting it on someone's doorstep and ringing the bell and then when the person opens the door and looks in the bag there's not even half a log in the bag and the first guy is just standing on the sidewalk in plain view staring at the house.

I think it pretty much is. But you know, sometimes you get up to shenanigans when you've been drinking, or hanging out at a con all day, or both.

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I see.

:heart:

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This is definitely a you story
both of you

I shouldn't write shipfics. I really, really shouldn't.

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I figured it was a bit sarcastic :heart:

Seriously, though, before editing it was like 13 words short.

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The two of us should not be allowed to collab on anything. :derpytongue2:

Why is this fic indirectly a sequel of itself?

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Why is this fic indirectly a sequel of itself?

Because half of this one and half of the other one is my work, and half of this one and half of the other one is Super Trampoline's work. And the other 'shouldn't write shipfics' story is even more weird and chaotic, looping back around in an endless sequel that spans six stories.

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