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Fylifa


Just a silly, glowing changeling OC that likes stories that involve ponies kissing, as well as 'other' things.

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So this is in the featured box with no likes, dislikes, or comments? New site is new and gonna take some getting used to.

The premise looks good, and I love that cover pic. I'll definitely give this a shot as soon as I can.

Okay, color me confused. What’s this “LoZ” abbreviation supposed to mean? :rainbowhuh:

Always upvote Sunset Sandvich. :twilightblush:

Next up: clonecest orgy?

If this isn't sequel bait I don't know what it is. But I'll bite it because I like it! :pinkiehappy:

“Sunny, these are flowers”

Missing punctuation.

Funny. Less clop than I was expecting. But good writing.

the pony professor gave hadn't been for Sunset

Missing punctuation again.

After being teased by two Twilights, Sunset was ready to take any victory she could get!

Did she forget that both of them are still there? ... Oh, nope.

“It’s an invitation to a... a... after after birthday party-” she sucked in a breath, her eyes going to pinpricks as she read the next words. “-at Canterlot High!”

Two Pinkies throwing a bang-your-double party at a high school ... when can we expect to read this?

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Ah! Thank you for the catch. It seems it was because those two ended with a HTML tag thing that my eyes missed. I fixed them.

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I always adore the ‘continuing adventures’ type of end. But if folk want a sequel I don’t mind eventually making one. (I actually was iffy on if a silly clopfic would actually be recieved well, silly me)

It actually tends to happen more on Saturdays

:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

Leaning on the fourth wall there, eh, Twilight? :rainbowlaugh:

This was expertly done, good on you. Hope you have plans for a sequel, I can't wait!

This is one of the better written show-style Pinkie’s I’ve seen.

I definitely would read the sequel!

Hm... Mane Six are adult. That biggest difference between them and their human counterparts. Pony-elements adult, successful and in control of their life. And because of this, in my opinion, they are closed that human Elements. Human Elements still teenagers, and who know how their lifes ended up?

This is the hottest thing I have read in a looong time

I love the duality of circumstances being compared and chapter 2, character interaction was engaging, SUPSOOT, TOILET, AND SPRINKLES FLOPPED AGAINST EACH OTHER AND IT WAS GOOD- this was all around super swell~

Absolutely delightful. Especially that ending. :rainbowlaugh:

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“About a half hour for a regular friendship problem, nearly a full one if I have to go full lecture!”


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Aww, thanks!


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Ironically, the first draft had started with a dry Spike and Twilight exposition-thon when my dear friend let me know how boring following that particular habit of the show was. So I threw something together and cake happened :) unplanned Pinkie scenes are the best even in the meta sense!


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Gosh, I kinda have to now! Though I might stagger the clop stories with serious ones.


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Hee! Close. I was thinking of more of the Velvet Underground song or Gibson’s cyberpunk novel n_n


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And to think I thought clopfic would be hard to swallow for most. I gotta stop underestimating readers and their tolerance for kinky <3


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Drat that might have made for a great chapter title, hee! Glad you like.


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<3


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Fleur de Lee: “You look like a pony with kinky tastes”

I MUST ask, is this a Sci-Twi x Sunset or Pony Princess x Sunset? because the image is confusing me

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Sorry! It is all pony world in ponybodies except for a small part in the first chapter. I'll clarify it in description!

Unless you meant the matchup. Well, it is all three :)

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I am also surprised at how many people like the stuff I do. I keep thinking about this story damn you, it has thrown SunLight to the lead spot in my ship fleet (it even beat Tuna...TwiLuna ) I know you most likely just meant to ship SciTwi and Sunny....but I can’t help but keep all three of them together in my head. (these ponies have turned me into such a shipping nut)

I feel a little sad for Twi. Sparky and Sunset are entering a brave new relationship, and Twilight was to be left in the aftermath.

Can't help but imagine a happily ever after where they're all together; as strange as someone being in a relationship with themselves sounds.

Not the Twilight x Twilight shipfic of my dreams, but I can see it from here (through a not unwelcome cloud of steam at sunset), which is closer than anyone else has gotten. Will happily read more.

(also feel free to keep ignoring LoE)

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Hee! Provoking a emotional response is the best thing an author wants to hear n_n. But don’t worry too much about Twilight. Both Twilights end up being quite comfortable with each other. Certainly they can share some Sun~. Nothing stops them from portal hopping or visiting, after all :)

The Twilight in this story is world-wise and adult enough to be inclusive. Ponies seem natural to be polyamorus. At least in my imagination!

I tend to enjoy certain ships. And while this isn’t the same ‘world’ as my other stories. I like having soft canon. So I’ll always usually write Twi/Sci/Sun warm /familiar with each other. If you like Twiluna, my other story has that pair up.

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It's not technically incest. Just masturbation.:twilightsmile::twilightoops:

Dear Celestia, have mercy on my loins.

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their all girls so it is a moot point any way

“It’s an invitation to a... a... after after birthday party—” she sucked in a breath, her eyes going to pinpricks as she read the next words. “—at Canterlot High!”

so did all five go thru?

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You could try reading the sequel and see~ :raritywink:

Sunset sat upright at that and for a time was stuck looking between the two mirrored alicorns. She wanted to say something, but they were intent on each other. Each trading quick glances and subtle shifts in posture and body language. All of it was done without speaking a word. Sunset had the sense that they were both running argument and counter-argument mentally.

why does this fuck me up so bad 😤

alternatively, We're Going To Need A Bigger Boat, for all this shipping! :pinkiehappy:

So is Sci Twi and Twilight being identical in every way deliberate? Usually she has her glasses and her mane done up differently even when she and the princess look the same in most other ways.

Love the story no matter what though.

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Hee, you have to remember before I wrote this story the latest EqD movie was Legends of Everfree (And the story is even set before that movie). So I had no conception that when the show had Sci Twi actually visit Equestria that she'd be a unicorn instead.

I'd figure to play up the whole twin dynamic, plus it seemed fitting for Twilight someone / somepony who can overthink things to fall into familiar grooves in either version.

Love the story no matter what though.

Aww thanks :pinkiehappy:

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Twi being an alicorn is infinitly better than what we got in canon of course. Them being idintical in every way is great for trolling everypony of course. Takes a bit more work in the human world.

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