When six mares get stuck on an island with no way out, a lot of free time and some feelings, what happens?
Lets go on a adventure with these six mares and see how their journey goes and how they survive on an isolated island.
P.S. This is my very first writing ever, so I’d love to know what you guys think about it. And please excuse my mistakes, I’ll try do the best I can to fix everything. Also I am bad at with summaries, sorry. Hopefully you will still read it and let me know how I am doing so far.
Chapters (2)
I like it so far, looking forward to the next chapter.
I like where this is going.
Looking forward ti what's next!
Enjoying this so far! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Thanks a lot. And thank you for reading.
I am working on the next chapter right now, will post it as soon as possible. Hope it'll meet your expectations. :D
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Thank you!
You will soon see the next chapter. I would love to hear from you again.
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Thank you very much for your feedback.
I am glad that so far everyone has liked it (I hope), I was a little nervous but thank you.
Even these little words, encourage me a lot.
I have a suggestion, maybe you could organize the words a bit more, like the talking should be separated from the other words
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Aww thanks so much! This really means a lot.
Yes that was definitely supposed to be 'mouth', my bad.
I will try to do better from now on.
Thank you again for the encouraging words! I will have a new chapter ready in a day or two at max now. I'm almost all finished with chapter 2.
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I don't know how exactly you mean, but I'll try my best to fix my errors. ^^
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Thanks so much for noticing! It really makes me very happy when people notice these small details. I mean I could very well have had Applejack or Rainbow Dash in Fluttershy's place but I wanted to also concentrate more on the ponies that usually are merely background characters in stories like these.
I mean no offense to others but I see that most people just concentrate on the two ponies they are pairing in a story and one of the other mane 6, (usually Twilight or Pinkie) so I tried my best to include all six of them to have at least a few minutes to be the centre of attention, I suppose.
So really thanks so much for noticing.
And I wish this chapter could have been better but it didn't turn out as good as I had hoped, next chapter I hope is better.
Yep... Rainbow Dash must have been really sad after the cider incident.
This was a good chapter and I like that the others are having their own moments and not just having it focused on AJ and Rainbow, I've read so many stories that focus on the mane pairing and just ignore any other pony that was there, and I could see Rainbow being sad as AJ dumped the cider, looking forward to the next chapter.
I totally fell in love with this story! Keep going! 💞
What a wonderful story!