A swedish guy who was tricked by the merchant from Resident Evil 4 game to buy a sword and five spell books was send to an anthro Equestria on an adventure he never asked for.
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Bra början.
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Tack ska du ha.
Torulf21
How tall is he
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He's originally 5.8 ft tall, later on he'll be 7.9 ft tall.
Ah, Sweden, the source of all evil in the world. I wonder how will this turn out.
solid
that sentence could use a rewrite I'd try "I took the sword and slowly pulled it out as I did the sword began glowing and burning with bloody real fire
like
months
angry outburst
shot
you don't need the second burn
surprised
set would work better there
and I only remember one wolf being seen befor this sentence
walked
The gloomy ruins
believing
try just "I was on the other side
cracked
ruins
creeps
don't need the "and"
stood
you don't need that "own"
caused
readied
prepared
shot
try" but she continued walking towards me
That entire sentence is a bit off but i'd try " when she got within ten steps of me I cast a flaming warning shot and created a wall of fire on the stone floor in front of her fee... I mean, hooves.
YOU'RE
Unaffected
shot
putting it out
shot
that sentence is awkward try" After hitting the wall and falling to the ground Nightmare started to regain her consciousness. But before she could do anything, two large blades formed a V towards her throat
turned
shot
try "blasting it from her hands and landing it by my feet
shrugged
that "seeming" is unnecessary
onto
"and" never comes before a period
sport
those two "in"s should be "a"s
you're missing the word shirt there
another period before the "and"
that skyrim isent needed
with only
was and was
try "I continued to watch as they talked
I could see that
that start to is unneeded
theres an "I" missing from before deactivated
forward
remove the then
kept
the
with
walking for what
could
explored
shear
strength
Manticore's
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Thanks for all the corrections. It's done.
Now if onky you had a Smartphone eh? Eh?
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I do have a Samsung, not that it would help of course😧
At your request, I've started reading this. So far so good, and I have spotted a few spelling mistakes now and then (though that doesn't bug me). But for now you have my interest.
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Er, if the Mane 6 only found the elements a short while prior to Alex's entering into Ponyville, how is it that their Town sign already has the catchphrase about it being home to the Elements of Harmony? Also, why would they announce the location of their most important wielders of their nation's superweapon? That just strikes me as incredibly stupid. Why not just paint a big target on them for every villain to target?
JUMP 4 JOY BECAUSE NECROMANCY YAYA
I know I'm late to do this but.
When you make a girl scream for all the wrong reasons...
I'm sorry. (Not really )
OK, I'm back...
Aaaand back to being a whorse...
Christ Almighty I've yet to discover a story with more cringe than this shit.