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All that dirty talk was funny...
Cock of the night... hahahaa!!
And then the castle is over flooded with cum.
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That would be a good story!
Down vote.
8421511
What if Spike and Gabby are in a relationship?
This was cheesy in all the right ways. Just, at once so damn funny, while being rather hot. Plus, d'awwwww they are just so sweet together.
Though Celestia tricking and tempting, and trying to get Luna to impregnate her against Luna's will is a bit... unsettling... not that Luna seems to be putting up TO large a fight. Still kind of wrong on you there Tia! But, the reasoning, the follow up to her feelings, wanting that again, it fits well.
Still a cheesy in the best way, fun, and sexy little story all around.
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Oh, good point about the consent there. Ugh, writing fully consensual porn is so much harder than just making sure nopony gets ambushed in an alley.
Added a bit of internal monologue for Luna that I hope helps?
Otherwise: Thank you! I am pleased to write happy, cheesy clop!
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Typo there, but, yeah it does overall come off like, Luna isn't WHOLLY unwilling just, more "Is this really a good idea?" But not really going to put up a huge fight about it.
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It was good feedback! Thank you!
Next time I write a breeding fic, I promise everyone involved will be like, "YEAH! Let's make us a FOAL!"
Okay, not promise. But probably!
Downvote or upvote....hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...upvote!
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Either you actually spend your time and energy spreading your salty tears on things you don't like, or you have a genuine literary concern that makes you press the red button, instead of just agreeing to disagree and moving on. I also guesstimate a 5% chance of you being a troll.
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Just a troll. Shit posting. You are one of the few that get that. Have a follow!!!
Please keep going. This is so good.
Good research project, because I note that there's a relative shortage of stallions in Equestria, even a thousand years after the War of the Two Sisters.
Hmm, Tenebris or Tenebra as names for the foal.
Ahh, you work well and consistently. Love it when you post up anything new.
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Thank you sir!
Best opening ever
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Are you suggesting Equestria's apparent gender imbalance is because of war casualties? Because that is a fucking sick headcanon.
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Hehe thank you.
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Maybe partly that, maybe partly a genetic predisposition to have only female foals.
Or (if you want to go really dark) some communities have a tradition of infant exposure, eliminating colts that fail to meet a physical or mental standard.
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Interesting!
My core headcanon is that ponies are morally better than people, so that last wouldn't work for me, but... IDK, there's a story somewhere in the war casualties thing.
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I like this a lot. I also wanted to say that the way you mention the Westermarck effect in a lot of these incest kink stories is a nice touch; like, we know incest is taboo and bad but instead of being just "we're family we shouldn't do this!" you have something to push off of that lets you play on not just "this is bad" but also the sense that "other people don't have that kind of attraction." I dunno, I just like it a lot and find it really good.
I also really like dorky sneaky Luna. I can see touches of how this relates back to an earlier story, too and I like that you reference your previous ideas!
I also like the sex. It's very good. Luna with the COCK OF DARKNESS she's such a dork.
But apart from the well-written clop, the sense of sisterhood and compassion and passion between them is also really well done, and I like that a lot, too. They're going to end up accidentally creating an even worse Twilight Sparkle.