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They say that life is the most precious gift and that it should be cherished.
Twilight had traveled the world in search of something to fill the gap. She has seen all the world had to offer. Yet the void remained. After all her years of travel, she now finds herself back where she started.
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I am more then proud of you sis. I nearly cried it was so good.
Faved for the non depressed immortal Twilight. But I feel you left out WAY too much. Mostly what Twilight's been doing for, however long.
Also MAJOR props for having Celestia's new student be an earth pony.
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I'm happy you liked it. Yeah, that part of celestia' new student was the part I enjoyed writing the most.
As for what happened, Twilight did anything and every thing within the bonds of the law. That's not what this story's focused on. This is story focused on when she finally reaches home.
great job needs sequel
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I'll think about it.
I like it!
The feeling of Twilight was fully conveyed, and I felt myself deeply immersed into it, nice job :D
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Thanks.
It's a cute story. A few grammatical errors, such as the in correct use of "their" (should be "they're"), and there was a confusing bit or two, but it was an interesting premise.
I don't get why the castle is closed because of Celestia's new student. I was under the impression that there was a problem there, a magical misfire, or an issue with the student. Perhaps with the suggestions and hints towards increased defense and security, there is some fear of an assassination on Celestia's student. But the story fails to adhere or address the point any further and just gives a shy and worried filly who is comforted immediately by the other alocorns nearly immediately. It would have made more sense to just have the castle close at night to the public because it's night time.
I do think you show a ton of potential in this you have an innate use of words here, a bit rough, yes, but no one can be a master without being a beginner. So, good job and keep writing stories that you enjoy.
Aslo, immediately thought of this when I read the title: https://youtu.be/oGs4jb1pCf8