RIBBONTAIL'S DIARY
KEEP OUT OR WEBSTER WILL EAT YOU
Okay diary, can you keep a secret?
Next year Miss Cheerilee is going to let us start interning with the ponies of Ponyville, and I know just who I want to intern with. She's cool, she's stylish, refined, graceful, witty, and she was even in Clothes Horse magazine!
She's the bestest most stupendous and amazingly awesome designer in all of Equestria. She's never taken on an intern before, but I'm hoping I'll be the first.
Look out Rarity, here I come!
Written for the Make Rarity Not Garbage contest hosted by the Barcast.
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Wow, you really managed to capture how children see the world which is used to great effect here given that its from the first person narration of a child, something ive only seen pulled off this well very, very rarely. We don't often see Rarity through this perspective.
But you still managed to explore a more mature moral message and situation in the story, so hats off to you!
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and that the style choice worked for you.
Very well done, dear author.
The story flows very well.
Added to my Favourites.
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I'm glad you enjoyed! And thank you for the fav.