The Rider, otherwise known as the Spirit of Vengeance has made every criminal in Eastern Los Angeles fear the dark. Why? Because in the dark, you never know when The Rider will descend upon you and force you to repent for what you did. Whether it be a prison sentence from the authorities, which rarely happens, being scarred for life mentally, or being slain for the crimes and sins you've committed. But for some reason, as soon as almost all the gangs in East LA have been brought down, the Rider disappears. And no one knows why. Maybe it was Gods way to help cleanse the sinful in East LA. Or he just disappeared. As to why, no one will ever know the answer. That is, except for the Rider himself, Robbie Reyes.
Chapters (4)
More?
Good start good start you got my interest in it. Please do more.
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Didn't know I was doing anything special. Just had this on my mind for quite a while now, and I dont see much of Robbie Reyes on the internet when it comes to things like this.
Cars wrong year. Robbies Charger is a 1969. Difference between the years is a 68 has a open grille and circular taillights while a 69 has a split grille and bar tailights
I like the ending like that was funny like u think
I fucking love Robbie and he's in eqg so its a win win for all!!!
Just a Funny fact, apperantly the Spirts if Vengeance, AKA Ghost Riders, are not tecnically Demons, they are in fact created by God as a black ops squad.
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Learn something new every day. Even for a big Ghost Rider fan like me.
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Not really a car guy, so I had to get my info on his car from different websites. But thanks for telling me, I'll have that little error fixed as soon as I can.
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Your welcome.
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As for being funny, I thought I would make an attempt at it.
Why thank you.
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its Comic Books, convolution is expected.
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Your not wrong.
Awesome
Great chapter. Wish it was a bit longer, can't wait to see more
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I understand your wanting for the chapters to be longer. And that's something I am continuously trying to make happen. Only problem is that I always seem to decide that chapters like these are long enough, no matter how many times I tell myself that it could be longer.
But I appreciate your response none the less.
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No prob
Hi
Well, go on then. Give us another
You my friend have earned a fav.
Shame you cancelled this story, but it's inspired me to maybe write my own GR/EQG fic with Robbie:
In this one, it's like what you did here. Robbie along with Gabe moves to Canterlot City hoping for a fresh start after East LA is cleared out of many villains and crime bosses thanks to the Rider. Robbie attends CHS and gets help for him and Gabe after being accepted into a new program created together by the different school heads (Celestia, Luna, Cadence, etc.) to give people who have difficulties with their home lives extra assistance. It's partially how Sunset survives on her own as she does with help from Celestia and Luna and now Robbie gets aid from them as well as Cadence and others as a way to aid students and promote good relations between schools to avoid the hatred that sprang from the CHS/CP rivalry. It also helps students who originally had to drop out get a second chance since Robbie had to drop out to take care of Gabe better.
Despite a slight rough start due to his social difficulties, he befriends the girls and many others at CHS and eventually becomes especially close with Sunset, soon resulting in romantic feelings for each other. The two eventually begin dating and fall in love. Everyone's happy for her and Gabe is happy for Robbie as he likes "Sunny" and sees her as a big sister. However, Robbie, is unsure if the relationship can last due to his "other half" and Sunset and the other's great distrust and unsurity of the Ghost Rider from what they've read about him. Meanwhile, though Sunset is happy to find true love after her fake relationship with Flash, she is worried and unsure since she knows how her luck can be sometimes and is worried about trying to keep the secret of Equestrian Magic from Robbie. Plus, both get weird vibes off if each other; something that actually SCARES Eli.
Meanwhile, Canterlot isn't QUITE as quiet and calm as Robbie may think. There is still plenty of crime. And it's about to get even crazier as once the Rider makes himself known, many of the bosses of Canterlot (Tirek, Sombra, Chrysalis, Ahuizotl and Grogar) are determined to not let their terf become the Rider's new hunting grounds.
Will Robbie be able to, a.) Keep Eli under control, b.) Keep his secret from his new friends, c.) Maintain his relationship with Sunset, and d.) Protect Canterlot City and possibly find a fresh start? Or will it all go up in flames? Will Sunset be able to accept Robbie's other half and the problems that come with it? Or will things go from bad to worse? And what could be the secret of Equestrian Magic that could have Eli Morrow so frightened and scared by it and could it mean possible good things for Robbie? Or is it TOO good to be true?
What do you think? If you have any good suggestions for the story, feel free to help. I could definitely use it
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I know you've probably given up on this story but I think it's a really superb story. I want to know what happens next. Do research on the Robbie Reyes Ghost Rider, Equestria girls and formulate a plot that feels right to your heart. Ultimately it's up to you but I'm hoping that you will uncancel this story, it has amazing potential. You could also look around your surroundings and in your mind for inspiration.
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I like your idea, do write!
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Thanks. Don't know when I'll be able to since I'm pretty busy right now, but I'll hopefully begin next year once things have settled down some.
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Ok. I look forward to it.
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