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Slayer99
I am a fan to crossovers with sci-fi, horror, etc. I am honored to present to you of the stories I will make for everyone
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I always feel bad for Jason I mean when people are born deformed they're still human and not freaks if I had a friend who is different from other people I'll protect them from jackasses people and jerks and everything above
8594941
I know that feeling.
In the series I am making Jason Voorhees the hero with his friends the Humane 7
This seems more of a summary than a story... just saying.
Sorry but I'm gonna be an ass here;
First off, contrary to popular belief it's Ki Ki Ki Ma Ma Ma, not Ch Ch Ch Ha Ha Ha.
Second off, learn to write a chapter of over 1000 words before posting a story. I literally barely skimmed each chapter and still got what happened:
Filthy Rich is and asshole who gets killed by Jason, then blah blah blah rushed chapter with little to no story in it blah blah blah Jason decides to have an OOC change of heart because somebody "gets him" even though there was a comic made about that and she got killed by Jason when she hugged him blah blah blah fight seen blah blah blah somehow everybody just accepts a serial killer into their friend group.
Third thing, Jason is OOC, he doesn't give a shit about a camp or the campers, he's basically a smarter, stronger, higher functioning zombie.
And Lastly, absolutely nothing from and of the other maine characters, about a line from Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy each. Every just fall into the background.
Definitely work on your writing skills.
8595081
I’ll try practicing with my own words besides I will Someday or tonight I will write Part 2
8634450
I agree with you it never ends well to suddenly make a horror villain/mass murderer in them the hero in one go like of your gonna do that it takes time and redemption to even get close and even then it's like meh just don't suit the role