• Member Since 4th Nov, 2013
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Cyrano


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That...was a good story. A depressingly sad story, buy also a good story. There were the little hints all along the way of what would happen. ...I liked it.

so what made them break up?

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Thank you very much for saying so, it means a lot to me :twilightsmile:

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It honestly could have been anything. This story is not as focused on what happened during the relationship as it how sunset deals with the aftermath of it all.

Such as not wanting to: get out of bed, answer her friends texts, or stay awake.

But at the end, she finally realizes that she needs to move on.

That was surprisingly sad , like even my dog is crying after I got done reading it. (I read aloud)

Well written though , you really made me feel for her , especially after she left , like I wanted to just hug Sunset and be like I’ll move in with you

A friend of mine names Zaid Val'Roa narrated this

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Hello! I reviewed this recently. Rather a downbeat read, but atmospheric enough that it works. As such, upvoted.

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