annnnd putting this in my following stories.

It says incomplete, so that either means the writer didn’t notice and forgot about it, or CHAPTER2!!

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Here I thought the size difference would be a turn off, but you made it work nicely. Great job!

"I NEED HELP GETTING CLEAN!" she blurts out suddenly, and then covers her mouth with bother her hands.

covers her mouth with both her hands.

You open the door and the first thing you notice is the absolute massive size of Fluttershy's bathroom. You wonder how such a small bathroom could fit inside such a small cottage. So you decide to ask just that.

should be 'such a large bathroom'

You need it just as bad as her, do you're happy to oblige.

replace 'do' with 'and' or this: 'You need it just as bad as she does; you're happy to oblige'

Hows the next chapter coming along

I'm working on my own self-insert with Fluttershy, I will put this in my read it later folder.

Well this is going from my "read it later" folder into my favorites folder.