Follow a hero as he transforms himself from a villain while undergoing new trails and experiences. The story is a satire focused on the modern American Society from a moderate perspective. Synapse is a yearling amongst his changeling kind. Synapse spent four long years faking an identity that caused him to believe that it was his true self. After suffering through events which appeared to permanently denote him as a villain, he will search for the reclamation of his lost identity. The road ahead will be difficult, but the will of fire burns strong and he will succeed.
Note: Future chapters will have the characters and tags mentioned!
Another Note: The first chapter is more of a prologue.
Chapters (3)
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In reference to the whole story, verbs are typically put in the past tense when told in the third person.
I'm interested in where this might go. Please do continue.
Absolutely thrilling!
I am very curious to see how you progress the story, and I love this Allucard being a vampony-colt.
Please continue with this story at all costs, and pm me when you update! I can see this easily becoming featured on Equestria Daily, just did the spelling errors and keep in mind what tense you are writing in.
Overall, it's brilliant so far. A really isolated idea that needs to be elaborated upon.
Interesting concept. The Story's satire is fascinating. Although, you do have to flesh it out a lot more. I find it funny how you mention within your story that your story has to be fleshed out more.
But don't fourth wall break --
Great chapter! Love the idea of a changeling transforming into a full grown dragon! I wonder where you got that from?
You have quite a few grammatical errors; missing quotations, missing words, I's that need to be capitalized, and other things here and there. I would fix that before some grammar nazi makes a big deal out of it.
Overall, really nice job on the personalities of the characters and the story-line over all. I'm curious to see how this will play out. Keep up the good work, and fix those grammatical errors!
So... It's NOT a Storm King becomes a good guy story. ...I'll still read it, but I want the record to show that I was looking forward to that story line!
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Well, I do adopt Naruto elements into my story. I could do a Talknojutsu scenario but I like staying true to the MLP lore at the same time.
I'll keep the idea in mind though.
Thank you for your support!
I want to see where this goes. Here's a +1 from me, and a follow.
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Thank you kind sir.
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Did this site always have a "Profanity" tag?
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I am new here, I'm not sure.
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Ok. So, how do you like the site so far?
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The website's layout is simple to use. The coding is well-done. I haven't encountered any bugs thus far.
The connection between PMs and Registered Emails was a great idea for notifications. Even more so, since the site maintenance annonyminity between user Ids.
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Ah, I remember when I was this young.
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I'm not all that young. I'm at drinking age in the united States.
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Does that mean 16, 18, or 21 now?
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Also, what is a "Wolf Simulator"?
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I'm twenty One mate.
A game where you play as a wolf and attempt to survive by scavenging food and drink. The more you survive the stronger you get and the wiser you become. My game had a day/night cycle with an integrated sleeping mechanic. It had a hunger, energy, and thirst meter aside from the basic healthy bar. A 3D real-time floating inventory that appeared beside your wolf in-game. An adjustable 3d person camera for left and right shoulder camera views. A pack system that allowed you to recruit pack members. And my pride was the spawning system for various NPCs. I tied it in with the day/night cycle so that certain prey and predators would spawn during different times of the day.
I had created the simulator for my dearest back when we where together as an anniversary present for our two year.
I was adding a leveling system that allowed the player to choose perks for their wolf. I never finished it due to my loss of interest after my ex played through it and really didn't try to play it again. I got a lot of praises from people with 1000 downloads but the software I used became bankrupt and the online servers where shut down.
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Well, that sounds cool to me. Rig the online mode to not need traditional servers and instead work over LAN/work the same way Super Mario 64 Online does, and that game can be played again. As for replay value, you could add different challenge modes then add achievements for doing everything you can do in the game, and call it a day.
Now, I haven't read the story yet, but, didn't the Storm King invade after the changelings mass reformation?
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Yes, this story takes place after reformation. Not all changelings chose to reform like Thorax from season eight.