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It had been a few weeks after the Memory Stone incident. Everyone had come back together, and everything seemed normal. That is until a new threat arised. New cards started to appear, and people started to go crazy. The only problem is that this is no magic from Equestria. This dark magic is from the human world. Now it is up to a new group of heroes, who never met before.

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the short description has a typo

individuals to top this new evil.

A lot of typos and the story was a bit confusing, never allowing the reader to understand what's going on. Luna has a son, but never explained how she had him, why he's sad, his connection to Twilight and I hope you see where I'm going with this.

Not a bad start but not a good one either.

"Nnnnooooo!!!" Sunset jumped in front of the blast. Her memories began coming out of her head in what looked like film. Each was a different color that matched the girls. "Pinkie! Fluttershy! Applejack! Rainbow Dash! Rarity! Twilight!" The last memory was yellow and blue, and it was much longer then any other. "No, not Eclipse." Tears began streaming down her face.

What about Spike though? Apparently Sunset just forgot Spike even existed there.
That's a huge problem I had with the special honestly.. it basically forgot about him since he's suddenly not with the girls despite we literally see him with them in a early scene at school in the same day.

Wonder if this will continue?


Where's Spike anyway?

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I was kind of confused on whats going on too.

Wonder what happened to the author anyway?

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