Lately, Rainbow Dash has been having nightmares about another version of herself who laughs while feeding foals into a terrible machine in the bowels of the Weather Factory. That would be bad enough but now those dreams are intruding into reality ...
Hi Katzoo12, thanks for the comment. I'm glad to hear you love the poem, please feel free to share it and support it :)
In regards to your query, there is intended to be a level of confusion and ambiguity as it is taking place in the dark and they can only rely on sound. And the sudden squelch sound, followed by silence indicates foul play. You'll have to read on to find out the cause and their fates :)
Hope this helps in making it come together for you.
I loved the Cough, and I love iambic pentameter! Thank you for this!
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Thank you Nocturnas.
Wasn't sure how everypony would go with verse, but it's my medium.
Happy to take any suggestions for other adaptations or if you would prefer an original story in verse.
So....who died here? Rainbow? It’s just a bit confusing. But I love this poem!
Hi Katzoo12, thanks for the comment. I'm glad to hear you love the poem, please feel free to share it and support it :)
In regards to your query, there is intended to be a level of confusion and ambiguity as it is taking place in the dark and they can only rely on sound. And the sudden squelch sound, followed by silence indicates foul play. You'll have to read on to find out the cause and their fates :)
Hope this helps in making it come together for you.
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You're welcome Cara! Glad you enjoyed it.
Have been working on some other similar stuff but happy to collaborate on stuff as well :)
This was moving me to tears, like actually.
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Hi, I'm very glad that you enjoyed it and that it had such an impact :)