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Starlight? Where are you, Starlight?

Is it bright where you are? Have the ponies changed?

Does it make you happy you’re so strange?

Ooookay?
I think I missed the context here. xD
Gotta say though, you are good at writing crazy.
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Who hurt you? xD

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Context: Starlight somehow accidentally killed off all the other ponies (but not all creatures, just ponies) with an advanced spell that time travel doesn’t seem to be fixing. Spike thinks he has a sigil that can successfully take them back before the accident to fix things. Whether the transmission ends because they succeed or because they die is up to the reader.

To get the crazy right, I use voice to text and say the first thing that comes to me, for authentic rawness.

run-on ramblings - post-apocalyptic ver.

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This deserves a better balance of ratings than it has right now. I think the VTT is a neat idea and it worked well for this. It would be annoying if it were any longer, but you stopped at the right point and left the readers' impressions raw and open to critical thought.

So thanks for that.

Huh. Very nice touch with the actual use of voice-to-text, and an excellent capturing of Starlight's mad desperation. In all, a fine apocalyptic log.

I. Am. So. Confused. :applejackconfused::applejackconfused:

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See my spoilered comment above for a simple explanation.

Okay... :applejackunsure:
This is a good start, but it leaves so many more questions...

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Yeah, it does, but given my general lack of motivation I can’t see myself expanding this to a multiparty adventure.

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Can I? It's got fun written all over it.

I probably would have liked this story if you weren't a commie. :heart:

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If it makes it better I’m to the right of most of my comrades.

I like this. Instead of telling us you showed us how the pony world ended. Clear and straightforward. :pinkiecrazy:

Nigga, what in the fuck?

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Your profile picture is one possible explanation.

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Wait... STARLIGHT IS BIGGIE SMALLS REINCARNATED?!

Is she has so little faith, why not try it?

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