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Lunar Flarion


Welcome! My names Lunar Flarion and I write stories! If ya like a story, please, tell me why! I'd love feedback on them!

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HT: Flare finds himself in a weird new universe. This universe contains vamponies and a world without sunlight, only moonlight. Where shall this Flare with a dark past go? What will happen to him? Read to find out...

Prim Bite is 21 years old
Midnight Bite is 25 years old
Night Blossom is 24 years old
Honey Glow is 51 years old
Blood Moon is 54 years old


Thank you to TearingNose24 for editing some of the chapters!
Cover Art is by me

Chapters (33)
Comments ( 41 )

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It stands for Horrortale. This Flare is a version of Horrortale sans.

I Do Not Know.
Surprised Me.

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Just figured that out before reading this at first I thought it ment hunger tale

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That’s another good name for Horrortale if ya ask me!

Anyways, do you like the story so far? I’d love to hear feedback from my audience!

Many much grammar errors.
But adorable story.

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Yeah sorry...
The tool I’m using too help doesn’t help much at all...
But, Thank you!

If your using google docs to wright the story on i can edit it if you'd like.

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Sorry, but I’m using the site to write the chapters, mainly because I want to know if I’m getting at least 2,000 words(New chapters)... Of this story!

A story rises and falls in the dead of night,
however, this story won’t give you a fright!
Or maybe... it might!
For the past has turned,
His old life has burned,
Will he rise?
Or meet his demise?
Read more, viewer,
After each chapter, the chapters become fewer!

how did this go from a training exercise in one chapter only to immedatly follow up in a snuggle fest I'm not complaing just confused

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Well, the turn from that is because Midnight was the first to ask for help and she works in the military.
Flare helps out the royal family whenever they need it, and in return, they give him someplace to sleep and something to eat.
And so Midnight asked first.

"Oh! I can feel my legs! Maybe I can walk?" she said out loud.

that just seems out of nowhere in chapter one she was rushing to help him from a hedge maze now she can't walk?

Comment posted by Lunar Flarion deleted Jun 21st, 2018
Comment posted by Viper Pit deleted Jun 22nd, 2018

hmm

both her and Tattered Moon, and M2idnight

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Horrortale is an Alternate ending for Undertale made by Sour Apple Studios. https://www.deviantart.com/sour-apple-studios .

Wait... What's the point of saying the ages of your OCs?

“Sigh, I guess you’re right...”

Statement: Later on you should write sigh like *sigh*

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I hope you enjoy the story and have a good day ^^

“Well, I got to say, I got more than I bargained for, but, I’m happy you think of me as the precious flower. But, I am not a flower anypony can just step on, I fight back!”

Oh, so your this universe's version of Flowey

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Heh, not exactly, kinda this universes version of sans, but more like just a version of Lunar Flarion ;^^

Though, if it is a joke, very nice ^^

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

Prim nodded dumbly, did he know how she felt? Or was he simply being calm in this situation to make her feel less like an idiot? Whatever it was, she calmed down a little, her blush never disappearing. She always wondered if he could read minds, upon the other powers he has. She thought it was weird, the powers he had, teleportation, Paradox Blasters, and so on.

has the ability to stop time and his eyes can understand time lines

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