The last warrior of the greatest army the world have ever seen must end a war all on his own, a war he never wanted, a war he had stopped fighting long ago.
This is a short story, it doesn't need to go anywhere, and it doesn't intend to. If you don't want to embark on a grand adventure of epic proportions this is the story for you, something to read while on the John or bored in class.
A Human war ah can't wait to read it.
I Liked it. :)
wow, just wow. in a few words, you show your true skill
Nice.... Really Nice
Liked it, just work on your spelling...
-Jorofrarie
985260 thanks for pointing out, I'll fix it shortly.
985630 Thanks... um I'm not used to getting positive reinforcement so this is kinda new to me.
985728 good to know you liked it.
985918 dyslexia is a bitch. (spelling blindness)
986757 yeah, sorry to hear that.
But honestly, I loved the story, keep it up.
-Jorofrarie
986962
well you get used to second guessing every thing you write, constantly cheeking grammar and spelling. Though the important thing is that you enjoyed it.
have a nice day.
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-Jorofrarie
It's good. I like it. As a man fighting a war himself, it makes us think about our own fights. Keep it up.
-just a Brony in Afghanistan