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Loki777


Just a dude who loves to write and create things.

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Twilight Sparkle was a prized student of Princess Celestia and Flash Sentry was a loyal Royal Guard and both were proud citizens of Equestria.

Then one day, both of them are cast out of Equestria for a crime neither of them didn't do that before they could think, they're rescued by the towering machines Gypsy Danger and Striker Eureka along with their pilots.

Once rescued, the pair learn that they were recruited by the Pan Pacific Defense Corps or PPDC to help them win the Kaiju War with Marshall Stacker Pentecost giving them this option: Where would you both rather die; in some nameless wasteland or in a Jaeger?

With their choice made, the Equestrian duo are thrust into a war of their lives...

*(Profanity warning is for swearing as people swear in war.)*

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 93 )

ok is it flash or big mac because short description says big mac

also pump the brakes buddy i think oyu got through about 4 chapters worth of story in 1 chapter

Pretty good start. Will the story focus some on Equestria as well? Cause it'll be interesting if we get to know exactly what it was Twilight was wrongfully banished for and how Luna is taking it since I doubt she believes Twilight would do anything like it and chewing her sister out over it, especially if further investigation points towards her innocence, especially if the Tree of Harmony has something to say about it being apparently sentient as of the newest EP. Even more if whoever planted the bombs were caught with more and evidence of framing someone.

Surprised Trixie automatically got the Element of Magic seeing how you can't forcibly sever the connection between bearers unless they do something making them unworthy of it which the Elements decide for themselves on given how Celestia and Luna lost their connection cause of Nightmare Moon and the fact the Tree has Twilight's cutie mark on it which is very important.

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All good things will come soon.

This story was based on the short Irredeemable Rejected and it was during an RP session with Spartan889 on the image Banishment by another Deviant art user that this story was first thought of.

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Ah neat. Well here's hoping we get more info.

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Also, this is set before Twilight became a princess and thus, never met Starlight Glimmer.

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I kinda figured that from the fact she's still a unicorn since becoming an alicorn is what made her a princess and that what this is based on still had her as one, possibly predating season 3 as of the time of the picture and story upload. Clearly Starlight wouldn't be here unless she was stupid enough to mess with time AGAIN without any precautions and I think she learned from nearly killing all life on Wasteland timeline.

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Indeed, I bet it is Queen Chrysalis behind all this fiasco, if my hunch is correct.

Adamantium and Vibranium?! If this mark 6 Jagear is made from those two types of metals... then it's got to be the most indestructible machine on Earth

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Yeah, I was inspired by another Jaeger that crossed over with Neon Genesis Eva, but added Admantium.

Doesn't mean it will be fool-proof as in the movie, Striker Eureka a Mark 5 Jaeger was crippled for a little bit by an EMP blast by Leatherback.

there was a story similer to this one in the past but it got cancelled and deleted:fluttershysad:
eneyway good story like the idea of twi and flash fighting gient monsters :twilightsmile:

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Thank you and remember, give this story a chance please.

Also, more to come.

i promise to read more before casting jugdement :raritywink:afterall reading only 2 chapters won't cenvay the whole story :pinkiesmile: so i'll read intill i can read no more:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I took a quick look, but it's not entirely explained where Equestria is in relation to earth/Hong Kong.

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It'll be explained in due time.

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Fair enough, though I feel an opportunity to give a hint was passed over in the chapter.

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I'll see what I can do to fix that problem.

EDIT: I just re-did the prologue to hopefully clear things up a bit.

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New note: I just re-did the prologue so people can understand certain things.

What is going to happen next?

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The aftermath of the first combat mission of Phoenix Ronin.

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Is Queen Chrysalis going to be punished for what she done?.

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Oh, she will just you wait and see.....

You lose me here. The story needs alot more polish and thought. Celestia wouldn't banish Twilight without firm proof so very OOC amd too much comradeship amoung the pilots , wasn't like that in the movie.

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Ever read the fanfics of where Twilight is banished?

Secondly, Queen Chrysalis if you've read it purposely put certain things in place to make it that Twilight did this and that.

Lastly, this is a fanfic okay as in the last chapter, the rangers of Cherno Alpha and Crimson Typhoon were almost killed, but were saved by Twilight and Flash and thus, both teams feel indebted to them. Behind the scenes when Kaiju aren't involved, they keep to themselves as I'll show in the next chapter.

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Don't worry, more will come.

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What is the status of chapter six?.

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I'll get to it.

Got distracted by life.

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The portal going to and from Equestria is very similar to the one in Equestria Girls, but it only affects Equestrians and those from their world while the humans from Pacific Rim stay the same.

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Next one is up along with another one.

Don't get too attached to the new Rangers though.

Maybe at some point in the story, you could make a chapter where celestia and shining armor feels guilty and regrets banishing them so they set of to try and find them? Just a suggestion but its up to you.By the way, the story looks great so far.Keep it up👍🏻

Awesome story dude!!! Good collection of references and jokes.

Are the seaponies going to have a cameo?

"Who are you all?! Are you five responsible for the destruction in Equestria?! Are you in league with those two traitors!?!" Rainbow Dash asked.

I would likely destroy Equestria and turn it to ruins.

Philippians

*Sigh* Its the Filipino Jaeger, 'Philippians' is not a word. Its either the Filipino Jeager or the Philippine Jaeger.

I say we all remake every franchise ever conceived with ponies

The story Great I I am looking forward to reading the next chapter

what race is this in and i am thinking on adding it to my list

Blue Blood: Family guy incident

Cabbages: ATLA, some dude selling cabbages

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It'll come in due time, I just need to get off my ass first.

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