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Huh, I doubt that this is going to end well...
I know nothing for what may happen next, but I hope that Micky will live through it.
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Feed me Seymour!
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NEIN!
well shit Mickey knows how to lay on people
Wow. Just... wow.
Well. Damn.
Well, may Faust have mercy on their souls.
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Yes, Tucker’s most famous line!
Next pls
and this one as well
She didn't understand about the consequences, hearing from that not only knows but experience them can destroy that shell. (I don't think that's correct.)
Come on, you could have push the investigation saga for at least 5 more chapters and get more dirt and shit like that, imagine how much more satisfying it would have been hearing his speech after chapters and chapters of hardship and hard work.
The chapter itself wasn’t bad it just felt to rush.
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Rip Link.
I want to hug you for this, but not in a gay way.
I have conflicted feelings on this. On the one hand, I think this isn't too bad a story. On the other, the way you portray Celestia seems a bit too innocent. And even if she was innocent, then she wouldn't let herself be pushed around like that. If she's a master manipulator as you say, how was she so easy to crack?
I know this is already a pre-written story that you're cleaning up and re-writing, but I hope the rest focuses more on slice of life stuff. I don't think this story does as well when you venture outside that.